Yay! A beautiful chapter, thank you! This felt really heartfelt - I think this was the perfect time to put this in.

Until next time!

Pan x

That's a sad story, but great as always. I'm on the edge of my sit for Jareth's reaction. I'm looking for the next chapter I hope it wouldn't takes hundred,lol.

Please don't take a hundred years to finish...lol That being said I love it as usual!

This story is adorable! I'm really enjoying it so far and I can't wait for the next update.

lovely, simply lovely I really am desperate to read more of this. Amazing job you have done here...just don't keep me in too much suspense! I die rather easily. Let me see..i've died like thrice? Anyways I was super confused in the beginning of the first chapter like 'maybe I skipped a chapter...or two? I was like what?! A baby?! Ehhhh? Since when?' Questions popped out like crazy I was like Derp...haha u really had me there lololol I will look for more references to this ;3

Wellllll...about your questions I'd say the way you make her personality is pretty great. I haven't necessarily caught something off I'd say just give her a little more forgiving type. I mean she has a great personality but maybe a bit more forgiveness in her should do. About the second question...besides that..i am not pervy I SWEAR! maybe you should make a one shot about the two going on a date and Jareth is just so unaware of what exactly it is. Oh suggestions suggestions lol keep it up x3

omg...jareth...:'(

*siiiiighhhhh* -.-...-_-...-_-
Why is Sarah being like this? I wish I had that sort of attention -_-... Lol I LOVE THIS STORY MUHAHA

Love the story! The Goblins are adorable and I can't wait for more :D Please update again soon!

Kyaaaaaaaaaa Jareth?! JARETH! XD

THAT CHICKEN! _ I shall look for patterns of that chicken! So far its randomnly there in the end lolol XD

Eeeeeh? Chicken? Lol I am definitely tuning in to read this. You seem to be very famous on this fanfic area ;-) must be really good :D

i like the story... i hope you update soon

I love this. It all started when I had a cold and fell in love with your little oneshot of His Nibs having the sniffles, and here we are now with this lovely story that happily is just as wonderful as I hoped it would be.
I really, really liked that chapter where J gives it to Sarah straight. I think the way you illustrated that she was almost unwittingly being selfish, but still could be held culpable for it was very good. Question, though, are you going to explain how he can re-order time and yet not be able to re-order it to avert disasters like murder? Obviously probably not in the near future because I have a hunch if Sarah asked Jareth would either go ballistic or go into depression or something...anyway, love it!

Beautiful. I really like this one.

And huzzah! for being up to date with this fic.

Until next time,

Pan x