Brilliant solution to get all the standard questions out of the way and build exposition. Well done.

Hater hand Sarah fluffiness love it!

Aw, poor Jareth. Glad he accepted the apology though. I liked the line about Sarah being a sucker for being needed. It fits her.
I don't know about other readers but I definitely like more frequent chapters, even if they are shorter.

One of the lurkers has stepped out of the darkness and has now reviewed! Well first off I would like to point out that this was a great chapter! You showed how Sarah is apologetic and misses Jareth. You kept her in character so points for you! For the second question, it's a no. You're doing great! For the third, maybe an excessive amount of glitter getting into cupcake batter?

Lovely navigation of shifting positions and a great interruption at the end.

your hoggel is equal to movie hoggle, your sarah somw what different to movie sarah

HI!
I simply have to tell you that I love your story which I came across last night- and you are right: Its different. It gave me quite some good laughs, especially imagining the goblins as "ugly cuddly toys" - HOW CUTE! Give them more room in your story again, pleeeassse?! I would love that! And please go on for at least another thirty chapters :-)...and soon, BIG HUGE EXTRA PLEASE!
Hoping to read more soon, Nico

I love this story. I have been sucked into it all morning, and still haven't done the dishes... Oh well... ;) #glitterforever

So for some odd reason I decided to look at Laby fanfics again, hoping to find something new. As I'm scrolling to get to the filter, I see this story. It's incomplete, meaning I usually wouldn't read because it's be such a let down if the author decides to stop. But then I see 137 reviews. 'Obviously' I think to myself 'it's pretty good.' So I take a risk and read. I was wrong. This fic isn't pretty good, it's awesome! I love how you portray Jareth and Sarah. The dynamic between them is wonderful. He isn't forcing her into something, although he'll take liberties. She gives him a chance, but doesn't give way to his will 'just because'.
So, in short...I love it!
I thought you wrote Hoggle very well.
Sarah seems in character, although I am curious as to why she's studying French.
Be confident! I can't find anything wrong. :)
I think it'd be great if eventually Sarah and Jareth had a bit more physical contact. But I really like the way you've limited what they've done so far because I think it's too early for Sarah to really be comfortable with all of the...Jarethness yet.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!

Great chap! In regards to your questions about Hoggle and co. I think you done well. Hoggle is pretty much grumpy and yet we know how much he cares about Sarah. As for the blooming relationship of Sarah & Jareth I think we want more progress on that in the sense that we see how much Sarah's character changes by growing up and knowing more about Jareth history.

Yay! Hoggle and the troupe are back! not gonna lie I was SUPER glad you didn't end the chapter right there, I might have taken some goblins hostage hehe JUST KIDDING! I would never... any way, happy for another chapter. she seems pretty consistent, cept for a bipolar moment here and there when it comes to jareth and its always hysterical to me when ever some one tries writing sir didymus :) but in the best way i promise. BTW, totally LOVE the lummox! Thanks for the chapter, i needed some glitter today ;)

Oh fine...since you asked nicely I'll go read it now...
Don't sweat the "delayed" updates. There not bad. I have a few stories I've been following from other authors and some have you waiting months for updates.

Your integration of Hoggle, Ludo, and Sir Didymus into the story was very enjoyable! You portrayed them well. I also love the bits about Jareth's actions and the goblin's mannerisms! Love the story.

This is my favourite story that's currently being updated! So, you know, keep updating..!

I loved this chapter. I am so glad Hoggle and co. are back. I know what you mean about people not getting him right. A lot of people cannort properly capture the grace aith which he zaps fairies to death. :P But really, you did a great job. As regards your questions, there is only one I have an answer for. I think that I would like to see a progression in their relationship. Not like 'BRING OUT THE SNOGGING!' I mean I just want Sarah to stop freaking out about him popping up. Which, of course, may be a selfish request as I am not Sarah, but eh. It is fanfiction. Anything can happen.