Reviews for Goblin Spies and Unexpected Visitors
Athena's Avatar chapter 17 . 12/2/2013
Brilliant solution to get all the standard questions out of the way and build exposition. Well done.
find your North Star chapter 7 . 12/2/2013
Hater hand Sarah fluffiness love it!
Naoko Matatabi chapter 21 . 12/2/2013
Aw, poor Jareth. Glad he accepted the apology though. I liked the line about Sarah being a sucker for being needed. It fits her.
I don't know about other readers but I definitely like more frequent chapters, even if they are shorter.
HalfbloodPride chapter 20 . 12/1/2013
One of the lurkers has stepped out of the darkness and has now reviewed! Well first off I would like to point out that this was a great chapter! You showed how Sarah is apologetic and misses Jareth. You kept her in character so points for you! For the second question, it's a no. You're doing great! For the third, maybe an excessive amount of glitter getting into cupcake batter?
Athena's Avatar chapter 7 . 12/1/2013
Lovely navigation of shifting positions and a great interruption at the end.
takininja13 chapter 20 . 11/28/2013
your hoggel is equal to movie hoggle, your sarah somw what different to movie sarah
Nicoletta chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
I simply have to tell you that I love your story which I came across last night- and you are right: Its different. It gave me quite some good laughs, especially imagining the goblins as "ugly cuddly toys" - HOW CUTE! Give them more room in your story again, pleeeassse?! I would love that! And please go on for at least another thirty chapters :-)...and soon, BIG HUGE EXTRA PLEASE!
Hoping to read more soon, Nico
Buggus264 chapter 20 . 11/27/2013
I love this story. I have been sucked into it all morning, and still haven't done the dishes... Oh well... ;) #glitterforever
Naoko Matatabi chapter 20 . 11/27/2013
So for some odd reason I decided to look at Laby fanfics again, hoping to find something new. As I'm scrolling to get to the filter, I see this story. It's incomplete, meaning I usually wouldn't read because it's be such a let down if the author decides to stop. But then I see 137 reviews. 'Obviously' I think to myself 'it's pretty good.' So I take a risk and read. I was wrong. This fic isn't pretty good, it's awesome! I love how you portray Jareth and Sarah. The dynamic between them is wonderful. He isn't forcing her into something, although he'll take liberties. She gives him a chance, but doesn't give way to his will 'just because'.
So, in short...I love it!
I thought you wrote Hoggle very well.
Sarah seems in character, although I am curious as to why she's studying French.
Be confident! I can't find anything wrong. :)
I think it'd be great if eventually Sarah and Jareth had a bit more physical contact. But I really like the way you've limited what they've done so far because I think it's too early for Sarah to really be comfortable with all of the...Jarethness yet.
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Bloodsired chapter 20 . 11/27/2013
Great chap! In regards to your questions about Hoggle and co. I think you done well. Hoggle is pretty much grumpy and yet we know how much he cares about Sarah. As for the blooming relationship of Sarah & Jareth I think we want more progress on that in the sense that we see how much Sarah's character changes by growing up and knowing more about Jareth history.
j'aime z chapter 20 . 11/26/2013
Yay! Hoggle and the troupe are back! not gonna lie I was SUPER glad you didn't end the chapter right there, I might have taken some goblins hostage hehe JUST KIDDING! I would never... any way, happy for another chapter. she seems pretty consistent, cept for a bipolar moment here and there when it comes to jareth and its always hysterical to me when ever some one tries writing sir didymus :) but in the best way i promise. BTW, totally LOVE the lummox! Thanks for the chapter, i needed some glitter today ;)
Jill chapter 20 . 11/26/2013
Oh fine...since you asked nicely I'll go read it now...
Don't sweat the "delayed" updates. There not bad. I have a few stories I've been following from other authors and some have you waiting months for updates.
ribbit5000 chapter 20 . 11/26/2013
Your integration of Hoggle, Ludo, and Sir Didymus into the story was very enjoyable! You portrayed them well. I also love the bits about Jareth's actions and the goblin's mannerisms! Love the story.
Randi chapter 20 . 11/26/2013
This is my favourite story that's currently being updated! So, you know, keep updating..!
Daliah Valley chapter 20 . 11/26/2013
I loved this chapter. I am so glad Hoggle and co. are back. I know what you mean about people not getting him right. A lot of people cannort properly capture the grace aith which he zaps fairies to death. :P But really, you did a great job. As regards your questions, there is only one I have an answer for. I think that I would like to see a progression in their relationship. Not like 'BRING OUT THE SNOGGING!' I mean I just want Sarah to stop freaking out about him popping up. Which, of course, may be a selfish request as I am not Sarah, but eh. It is fanfiction. Anything can happen.
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