Reviews for Goblin Spies and Unexpected Visitors
Vittaria chapter 18 . 11/15/2013
...did you REALLY need to throw down the writing gauntlet?!

...fine. Fine, fine. Be that way. Damnit, I haven't published anything in eons but so help me, I'm about to.

It's all Jareth's fault.
ButterflyOnTheWall chapter 18 . 11/15/2013
I love your story but I have to say I do look forward to the end of the chapters because your A/Ns are hilarious! I'm seriously gonna leave a pause before the end of my sentences now just to stress people out! its so true that it sounds very...suggestive
TheRealEatsShootsAndLeaves chapter 18 . 11/15/2013
"How Biblical of you." Hilarious!
Honoria Granger chapter 18 . 11/15/2013
I love this story so boggin' much... You're such a good writer and so freakin' funny and you write Jareth so well...please keep it up. Goblin Halloween sounds alarmingly full of possibilities...
jessiebaker chapter 18 . 11/15/2013
you have no idea how much reading your story makes my day thank you x :)
j'aime Z chapter 18 . 11/15/2013
That's ok, i didn't want that particular piece of chicken! anyway ;) so happy for another chapter! The scene with sprog was so stinking cute! Loved it. And you're right, you can have all the necessary parts for a family but with out the love and attention, you do feel terribly alone. my parents divorced when i was very little and it was incredibly hard for someone so young but i was lucky enough too have three loving parents after that, just took till i was a little older to realize we were ok. I'm loving how J can be so tender with S one moment, when she really needs it, and then turn around the next and be a suggestive arse :-) o and the goblins carving pumpkins?! I just picture my two year old and one year old, pretty much the same thing I think bahahaha :-)
Guest chapter 17 . 11/13/2013
Yay! I was so excited to see another chapter that i burnt my lunch on the stove! Lol the confiding on the computer was great, i know when i'm trying to sort things out or speak from the heart, i find it much easier to write on something other than paper by hand. so thanks for that. Yes! Where is hoggle? I miss that grouchy guy :) i hope they do a little bit more note writing like that, its almost like secret messaging :)
can't wait for the next chapter!
TheRealEatsShootsAndLeaves chapter 17 . 11/13/2013
Guilty goblins trying to act nonchalant. Pretty darn cute.
jessiebaker chapter 17 . 11/13/2013
Loving how you're keeping Sarah from holding back and really taking her time with her emotions :)x
Isabella84 chapter 17 . 11/13/2013
YAY! I knew logging in on the 13th would be a good thing! Have I mentioned I love this story so much that I actually dragged myself out of creepy lurker mode to write a review? Still love it! Your writing makes me laugh but I also love that you actually write Sarah as realistically as possible. That's always refreshing in a Labyrinth fic. I mean those are totally the questions I would ask...and probably write them out in Word as well. And now I totally want a grilled cheese sandwich! Though you aren't like tea after all, which totally tastes like socks, but as you're English, I will let that go for now. :P Can't wait to see where you are going with this :)
Honoria Granger chapter 17 . 11/13/2013
Fantastic. Love how thoroughly tender and exasperated and yet straightforward he is. REALLY love the idea of him magicking her computer, and the goblins trying to be blasé about it...this is such a neat story. Please let her realize she really does love him fairly soon, though...
j'aime z chapter 16 . 11/11/2013
Yup, still laughing out loud to myself as I read haha. Very much enjoying this story and so you know, you have inspired me to make some edible glitter ;) Also, the non American writing differences I see are rather refreshing :) can't wait for the next chapter!
(Takes a glitter muffin)
j'aime z chapter 11 . 11/11/2013
Ok, I was going to wait until I was caught up on your whole story but after this particular chapter, I could not help but review. I just wanted to let you know that I was laughing my ass off- which I tend to do while reading, earning me odd looks from other people in the room- any way, I love your sense of humor with this story and I am thoroughly enjoying reading your words :)
Pipersara chapter 16 . 11/10/2013
Love the story, really look forward to more. Very engrossing!
Jodelle chapter 16 . 11/10/2013
Wonderful. Mischief takes center stage. And yes coffee bad...

Hereby declaring soda the drink of all drinks!
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