Please update more often and write more if you can. I really like it! It's one of the only labyrinth fan fictions I've read that doesn't make me cringe or sigh at cliches! 3

I love it! I love that Jareth is ashamed of his "old ways" and is now dedicating himself to her. Their so CUTE!

This story is wonderful, I really like the way you've written Sarah's maturity in opposition to her innocence, she seems a wonderfully realistic woman. Jareth, obviously, we don't have his point of view, but his moments of human vulnerability mixed with his otherworldlyness are thus far compelling. I look forward very much to seeing where this story goes :)

It's so very cold here. I'm jealous. ;)

All I can think of is Bloody Mary. Thanks for that. Haha. Lighting candles in a dark room with a mirror...

I always like to think of Sarah as being a knitter. Mostly because I'm a knitter and knitting is awesome. I suppose it's a bit of "write what you know." :)

I enjoyed their arguing. Haha. And of course it's a challenge. Isn't it always? :)

Again great. I like how unsure of each other you've made them. But Sarah should really ask more questions than how much of a player Jareth has so far been in his giant immortal tight-pantsed existence. Here she has the perfect opportunity to get some decent answers now, not later, and she falls asleep. But really the story is delightful, so please keep up. And thanks.

Não precisa implorar sua historia tem um toque de humor fantástico e se esta lendo isto em outro idioma é porque realmente gostei dela, obrigada por tornar minha insônia mais suportável.

"...all over me like a rash..." XD Pretty fair description, actually.

Err, sorry for not reviewing last time. This story is progressing really nicely and I really like how Sarah is keeping Jareth on his toes. Keep up the good work!

Just looking I realized I didn't review last chapter. I swear I thought I did. Sorry.

Wow, I was not expecting that to be the question that was bothering Sarah. Though it makes sense for Jareth to have had others, can't imagine him not. But since he's seen her he was her's is so romantic. I like that he was ashamed of it, since didn't he just take her first kiss not too long ago?

I like the tender side to him, it's nice to see. Love the story.

love it. keep going. everytime im on i check to see if its updated. waiting for next chapter

Oh my gosh! I love your story and where its going! Keep up the good work! Can't wait for the next chapter!

I love your story ( and your user name) . I like where their relationship is going. This chapter made my day. Tkanks for writing 3

I love the way this is progressing :) I'm glad you brought up Jareth's tendency to not answer a question straightly. I'm beginning to think it's a characteristic of most of the male population :P