Reviews for Goblin Spies and Unexpected Visitors |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i LOVE this! I love the lighthearted, mischievous, teasing between Jareth and Sarah. How you describe Jareth, especially when he's angry, is just perfection! well done, please continue! :))) |
![]() ![]() Watch out, Jareth! Sarah can be quite the Task Mistress! Good Luck! ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea of short one-shots as chapters, but will the story have a definite end? Keep up the amazing work! |
![]() ![]() I totally agree with everything Sarah said. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm enjoying this, I think your portrayal of Sarah and Jareth are very well done. And I always enjoy it when authors involve the goblins in their stories. Some seem to forget about them entirely and focus on the fey folk who weren't a part of the original story. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OK...I've never reviewed a story on here before. Not that I've never found one that was good but..well, just lazy I guess. But I HAD to for this one. I love the way you write! And it doesn't hurt that you are writing about one rather delicious Goblin King! But you manage to capture the characters so brilliantly and just the way the words flow...yeah...love it! You write the way I always wished I could! So just in case you decide to be cruel and torture your readers by withholding chapters, I am offering up this humble review as a bribe. So keep writing please! I can offer cookies as well if necessary. Just sayin' : |
![]() ![]() ![]() If it makes you feel better, I'm American and my point of view would be the same. If not with an awesome accent attached. ;) |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol...I think DUN, DUN, DUUUNNN! sums that ending up perfectly. Please post more soon! :) |
![]() ![]() Whaaaaa? How could she say no?! D: Please update soon! I need to know what happens next D: |
![]() ![]() SHE SAID NO! BRAIN JUST EXPLODED! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woah! I'm kinda of glad Sarah said no. But I dread what will happen next. Keep on writing and update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo! Really? Stopping there? Come-on! IT'S NOT FAIR! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I suspect she has a counter-offer. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() UGH! Stop with the cliff hangers your driving me crazy! Lol.I love this story it is really funny and sweet.I need more chapters now please! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You're killing me here! Is Sarah Nuts? More updates please. |