Reviews for Fireball
20000 WPM chapter 31 . 3/29
I really enjoyed your story. I thought Edward and Alice as human twins worked remarkably well.
Viveen chapter 31 . 11/7/2016
Great story!
sweetsouthernsongbird chapter 31 . 10/30/2016
I really enjoyed this story. Nice to see Edward in the other side. And the whole Jasper and PMS thing was freaking funny. And probably fairly accurate lol.
blb1000 chapter 31 . 10/23/2016
Thank you! I like to switch back & forth between AH & vamp stories. This was a breath of fresh air. On to read more of your tales...
blb1000 chapter 30 . 10/23/2016
And his first mountain lion.
blb1000 chapter 28 . 10/23/2016
I'm happy you didn't have Maria show up at their tent. The invisible bonds talent was quite creative!
blb1000 chapter 27 . 10/23/2016
You may have used global replacement to change "it is" into it's & I am into I'm, but it's causing issues in your story. I've (another example) noticed at least one in each chapter.
blb1000 chapter 26 . 10/23/2016
I hope they find an abandoned cabin in the mountains this time instead of the tent.
blb1000 chapter 25 . 10/23/2016
Not a lot of serious fighting practice so far.
blb1000 chapter 24 . 10/22/2016
I'm wondering if Maria had any way of knowing that Ed will be talented, before meeting him?
blb1000 chapter 23 . 10/22/2016
That was a pointless evening.
blb1000 chapter 22 . 10/22/2016
Yay, he finally asked!
blb1000 chapter 21 . 10/22/2016
Sounds like the house should go to the Chicago Historic Society.
blb1000 chapter 20 . 10/22/2016
More match making... Sending G off to meet K ...
blb1000 chapter 18 . 10/22/2016
I hope he's going to ask Charlie about staying a few days in Chicago soon.
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