Reviews for Harry Potter and the California Crew I
DanelNier chapter 34 . 2/3
hey I hope you are well with all this of the pandemic and that, I wanted to pass and leave my comment to say that the story they wrote is great, great job

I do not know if they have or had thought to continue with the story but I hope they do (hope is the last thing that is lost) I will be looking forward to the continuation

Cheers, stay safe
Lesbihonest93 chapter 34 . 8/17/2015
I love it! when will you start posting the next installment?
Jori chapter 1 . 5/29/2015
When the next book?

Please I want to kow I can't wait for reading an another month
Guest chapter 34 . 12/26/2014
sequel pleas
RoseGafe chapter 34 . 12/14/2014
Nice work
At the begining I thought I wasn't going to like it (mix Harry Potter and Victorious, it doesn't sound right) but now I just can't wait to read the second part.
lil-ying-fa chapter 34 . 9/24/2014
Good story. Love the idea.
But grammer and punctuation need some work. I suggest proofreading first because it seems like you are describing the wrong thing so it is at times confusing. Also excess use of colors regarding the characters that it at times get confusing also.
CyberGold chapter 24 . 9/5/2014
So I decided to read this at work and at first it was weird imagining the victorious crew mushed in with HP but I like it a lot. So far so good!
lil-ying-fa chapter 29 . 8/2/2014
Good story. English had has improved alot. But sometimes things are described too much or too little. But keep up the good work. Like the plot. Pls update soon
Radon96 chapter 1 . 7/15/2014
I like the harry potter movies (never cared for the books only because they are to long) but I got to say if they made it this way I would have loved them so much more. Wether you go through all the books or not (hopeing you do XD) I won't stop reading this it has become my # 1 fav book
amal-rukia chapter 27 . 7/3/2014
I have to say that I read all chapters, and I enjoyed this story! I love this crossover! Tori and Trina turned out to be Harry's cousins, oh and don't get me started with Jade and Draco! You put Victorious's characters into Harry potter's universe really well! :)
I love the Jori moments, too, Jade's brother's is so cute and lovely :D the story might be slow at times, but it stays enjoyable, it deserves more reviews than this, when I post a new chapter of my story I'll make sure to write a shout out for this :)
I'd love to see you guys follow all seven books with all the characters! I'm really excited about seeing them grow up, and their relationship too (Jori of course) I'll go back and watch the movies again, 'cause I forgot everything about HP and sometimes I get confused! (Too bad the books aren't avaibale in my country!)
Just me chapter 25 . 6/1/2014
There Jori 3 was entertaining chapter, Beck is jealous that Jade spent much time with Tori. I do not like much in this fic Beck: s now Rex I love and hate... More please
Just me chapter 24 . 5/16/2014
oh I wanted to read that Tori and Jade played the first game, but maybe the next game. I really liked this chapter, it was interesting the first game of Quidditch. They adore Jori moments in history are so cute, flirty comments by André recounted while the game was hilarious, now that Tori is a spy by Jade without her ask what I like to see that she wants to do things for her. I liked the chapter, hoping to read more of this story, we read in the next chapter
Just me chapter 23 . 5/3/2014
wow, loved the possessive when Jade and Tori Cat your "toys", I do not like Beck's silly, because he did not want to see Jade do not like that ... Please more.
AprilBaby95 chapter 23 . 5/2/2014
I love Jade. Also glad to see Cat and Andre being included. And the Bade moments of course.
Just me chapter 22 . 4/17/2014
Haha I can not believe that really, nobody dares to 'mock' Jade apologizes because, well, I do not mock me. Jade always get what you want, I've always liked Jade when he comments that cause Tori blush, she is sweet and cute. Hermaione complain a lot (too much) but still adore is my favorite character (I would have liked to stay with Harry and not Ron, but nothing can be done) The famous phrase "We have to go before they kill us, expelled or worse than us. " I loved this chapter the scene, please continue, I'll keep commenting on this fic is amazing.
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