|Reviews for Love in flames|
| Rebekah78 chapter 14 . 12/18/2017
Noooooooo this cnt be the end ik the story was last updated in 2014 and now its almost 2018 but still you HAVE TO KEEP GOINGGGGGG PLEASEEEEEE
| Rebekah78 chapter 12 . 12/18/2017
I like how in the end elena told care to buckle up and since care is immortal it made it ironic and super funny
| Rebekah78 chapter 9 . 12/18/2017
I love the entire thing but the end is my favorite when she put her head on his chest
| Rebekah78 chapter 5 . 12/18/2017
I really love your stories and these chapters have been very entertaining! !
| Guest chapter 20 . 6/20/2014
Ch.20 didn't make any sense how is she dead. Didn't he just stab her in her chest not her heart.. and even the story said that she would die if he didn't pull it out I'm not understanding anything
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/5/2014
This is weird...just considering that Caroline/Bonnie/Elena are supposed to be 'popular'
| Jayne Foxx chapter 21 . 1/5/2014
Please help me understand some things:
1) Between chapters 8 and 9 it magically goes from sunrise to night time in the space of about two minutes… how?
2) Why are they stuck in the hotel at night? Shouldn't they be able to leave now that the sun has magically disappeared?
3) In chapter 10, she just up and walks into the sunlight.. How!? The fact that she has no daylight ring/bracelet/necklace was the original problem, wasn't it?
4) When they get locked in room in Chapter 16, why don't they just break the door down? It's a room full of both originals and strong, old vampires.. Surely it's within their capabilities to break the door down? O.o
5) Stefan owns a 5 seater car yet he can only fit 3 people in it (Elena, Bonnie, and himself). Unless he has a super duper messy car, I'm not seeing it.
6) Stefan is supposed to come back and pick Caroline up but he doesn't.. It doesn't seem very Stefan-y to forget about it..
7) Caroline gets stabbed with a 'steak'. I could understand being stabbed with a 'stake' because that would actually pierce her tough vampire skin, but a barbecue kind of steak? It's a bit too soft for stabbing people with… I'm not seeing that.. (Although it did make me laugh :P )
I did enjoy the story though, I stayed way up past my bed time to read it :) Despite its many faults it does have its merits. Please take all of this criticism constructively, I don't mean to offend and wish you all the best in your future writing endeavours :)
| guest2015 chapter 21 . 1/5/2014
nice ending! I enjoyed reading your story!
| TheGreenKnightOfTheForest chapter 21 . 1/3/2014
Cute ending :)
Write a sequel :D
| Guest chapter 21 . 1/3/2014
Aw what a sweet ending! I wouldn't mind a sequel but if you don't write it I think this was a good ending for this story anyways
| HM chapter 1 . 1/2/2014
Wait is Caroline really dead?
| shewaslikeart chapter 6 . 1/3/2014
Am I the only one who thought that Klaus was the wolf? Loving this fanfic! Xxx
| Guest chapter 20 . 1/2/2014
Aww that was so sad!
| Ryane chapter 20 . 1/2/2014
Man. He is so… SEXY! An sweet and caring and sexy and smart and artistic and did I mention sexy. Especially when he shows his emotions
| VitaMeataVegaMin16 chapter 19 . 12/8/2013