|Reviews for When One Door Closes|
| twinkels chapter 7 . 5/31
Lol loved to have seen Quasimodo saying who’s Victor Hugo or what’s Wikipedia
| Olddantrucker chapter 13 . 4/12
I saw a pet peeve of fanfiction thread and one of the lists was a total rewrite of the script as we come to fanfiction for something new or fresh. At least your OC isn't a tag-a-long not having any personality or trying to 'force' a weakness as it comes out as bannana peel slipping stupid.
| Olddantrucker chapter 12 . 4/12
A Breath of the Wild approach would've been funner as we have already seen the movie dozens of times. Breath of the Wild still has the end goal of Ganon but how you get there is up to you. It doesn't flood your map with objectives. There's a neat video of how Nintendo's BOTW's Shiekah Tower fixes Ubisoft's Tower Problems.
BOTW is the first non linear Zelda game and other then lack of themed dungons it works as the physics are realistic and there are many ways to do a single task. You can use magnetism to lift a metal box and land it on a monster or use a remote bomb to blow them up or use bomb arrows,fire arrows and get all the Boko creatures jumping up and down looking around.
| Olddantrucker chapter 10 . 4/12
THIS is the main reason we have gun rights that are being stripped away. You take a little they take a mile. Happened in every nation that tried centralized government. At best it's as effective as AMTRAK as they never turn a profit so never can innovate or the .
As far as I'm concerned getting your driver license should be done all at the training school as the trainer will know your abilities best.
| Olddantrucker chapter 7 . 4/12
Actually she should've told him about plumbing and things just to cheer him up if anything and laugh about the differences. Heck going from America to Europe you have to deal with electrical voltage differences. Meaning your American hair drier will at the very least operate at the incorrect spead and may even short out catching fire or blow out the electrical system to the place your staying though fuses would catch it.
One time we stayed at the Bishop Hotel in Port Townsend WA and Mom plugged her hair dryer and something else in at the same time (it's an old 1900 building) and blew the power out to the building at 7AM. Fun.
We had to get the manager up to reset the fuse as the fusebox was locked and we couldn't reset it ourselves which we tried.
| Oldantrucker chapter 6 . 4/12
What if for example your OC was a proud concealed carry owner or at least had a taser? She could've fired the taser at one of the guards holding Quasimoto down and he would be in a world of pain. Police officers if they are ever allowed to have one have to be tased themselves.
| Olddantrucker chapter 5 . 4/12
I am not sure if you read reviews but there is nothing wrong with a few changes here and there as you realisticly can't have an OC without something being different. (cause and effect).
How do we know which timeline is right to begin with?
| Olddantrucker chapter 3 . 4/12
Why did she shout "Sanctuary!"? She should've just slamed the door shut and if it had a lock use it!
| Olddantrucker chapter 2 . 4/12
I'd recommend she watches one of Rick Steve's France Travel Tips for free on his website as he explains how to get around and some dos/don' . He is very good with his history (some things is a miss) but overall I recommend him. My family watches his stuff all the time. He has both full shows and travel talks where he talks to an audience that asks questions and he explains things. Sometimes he has a helper with him that talks.
Expoza is also good especially if it's either the guy narrator or the stronger voice women. There are a few episodes of a women that calls celtic (Sell Tic) instead of a K and she has one episode where her voice isn't in sync with the pictures and by not in synch I mean almost a full minute behind.
That's pretty bad! She didn't seem to do anymore after that.
| Olddantrucker chapter 1 . 4/12
Most survivalists recommend at LEAST a 72 hour survival kit bare minimum.
| Altiria-Aty chapter 14 . 8/5/2018
omg what?! I need to know what happensssss! I gotta see them hook up! I SHIPPP ITTTTT
| Altiria-Aty chapter 12 . 8/5/2018
lol, Clopin's just trailing off because he doesn't know her. too funny!
| Crazykat100 chapter 14 . 3/4/2018
cant wait for the next chapter
| Guest chapter 14 . 6/1/2017
Really Like this story so I Hope you update soon. Want to See of she Goes back Home or stays.
| victoria chapter 14 . 3/23/2017
this is amazing your writng is so good please update again soon