Reviews for The Harbinger Of Change
Worldmaker chapter 6 . 7/21
Way too much text wasted on irrelevant, unnecessary author's notes.
Guest chapter 3 . 7/9
There is no such thing as too much detail. Its like overkill, there is no such thing. Its also known as world-building.
Apparuerit Diabolo et Loqui chapter 1 . 6/12
"Hadrian Potter"

I think I puked a little.
Foxy-Floof chapter 10 . 6/7
Huh... That's an interesting way to end the chapter. By the by, this isn't abandoned, is it? I like it, and it's honestly kinda neat seeing the Turians being spanked like naughty schoolchildren.
Foxy-Floof chapter 9 . 6/7
Well, I'm sorry that ended so quickly. But I'm also glad that the Turians got such a thorough face-kicking.

Also, I'm not a fan of how completely the Shanxi Defense Fleet was destroyed. That's a lot of lives and ships lost. But I understand that War is Hell, and nothing ever goes quite to plan...
Foxy-Floof chapter 5 . 6/7
Eeesh... I don't know how I feel about Hadrian having so much power... But on the other hand, he's got an Empire to run. He needs it, otherwise, nothing will get done...
Meh. I'm okay with it. And the Turians getting one in the nose.
Foxy-Floof chapter 1 . 6/7
Okay... Emperor Hadrian Potter... Okay.

It's a bit much to take in... I'd love to see a prequel to this.
Kin-Ryu Chikara chapter 8 . 4/18
Now this was what I was waiting for. Finally Harry enters the scene.
As for your poll, I vote Medium.
Kin-Ryu Chikara chapter 5 . 4/18
Wow, that's stupid. Seriously, what is wrong with your AI? They are acting like undisciplined children! This story has great potential but your AI is ruining it! Seriously, calling the enemy loser just as thousands of his people die. Not cool man.
Kin-Ryu Chikara chapter 3 . 4/18
Oww...I just facepalmed so hard...that must be the most stupid AI I've ever read about. Yeah, telling a group of known anti-AI people that you are an AI, not smart. And to be honest, not a good way for an author to initiate a conflict. Yes, it was that obvious and feels very forced.
Oh well, let us see how the Empire lead by the Master of Death stands up to hostile aliens.
vouyv chapter 10 . 2/20
I liked this story very much. Will you continue it?
overlord of hell 2012 chapter 10 . 2/9
Enjoyed your story and look forward to reading more
chaoswizard chapter 10 . 1/30
Keep it coming plz it is good
SeverlyLate chapter 1 . 1/27
Ye, he was the ultimate Mary Sue...
chain.reader chapter 10 . 1/15
badly written
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