|Reviews for Fate Revelation Online|
| dreaddragonknight chapter 79 . 2h
poor poor Kirito, he really wants to avoid the siscon route, understandable. Also fics like these are why Argo is my favorite i wish she had gotten more screen time in the anime
| dreaddragonknight chapter 78 . 2h
damn, will you give titles to any other characters soon? cause seriously you keep getting these guys to do amazing accomplishments, not epic like taking down a boss near solo but still what you have Diabel doing is stupid amazing.
| dreaddragonknight chapter 77 . 3h
holy shit, you made these guys both relevant, interesting, and amazing in their own way. great job i thought this was gonna be the part where you killed them off, glad i was wrong :D.
| dreaddragonknight chapter 76 . 4h
ooooohhhhhhhhhhhh, Ilia is socially retarded and everybody else is just used to it. Also Bel is gonna get up-ed the butt isn't he?
| dreaddragonknight chapter 75 . 5h
ok then... that happened, i don't know anything about demons from the Fate series so i have no clue how bad this is, just that it is.
| psp reader chapter 79 . 12/12
| jcampbellohten chapter 79 . 12/5
That was pretty funny, but why the setting descriptions like it's the first time Kirito's been there when it's the third?
| jcampbellohten chapter 78 . 12/5
Well, that was great. Damn, Diabel's stuck in some shit. I'm curious about when people are going to learn about Laughing Coffin. Ohhhhhh, I want more!
| jcampbellohten chapter 75 . 12/5
"A new moon shone, casting pale light across the ground." A new moon doesn't shine; by definition its entire visible side is dark. I don't know if the surroundings would be pitch-black without manmade lights on a new moon night, but there's no moonlight, and you mention "pale moonlight" a few times.
That aside, I'm anxious to see what effect this development has on the characters. Also, Johnny was funny.
| renextronex chapter 12 . 12/2
you know, I really want to like Shirou and most of the time I even achive it... then... then someone writes this kinda thing and makes me remember what a little piece of shit he is and why I have to force myself to like him
| AsTheGlassMelts chapter 79 . 11/30
Man every single time I catch up after a super long break letting it build up it's on one of these chapters, and I NEVER read omakes. Ever.
Super depressing to think there's more and just be denied D:
| AsTheGlassMelts chapter 71 . 11/30
I cried here. I'm not as evil, but I totally get Kuradeel's feelings. The fact that he got into the guild, and right at the end where he feels he belongs, I cried.
| AsTheGlassMelts chapter 62 . 11/30
So, I'm rereading this and I found it funny that he was saying Tsubame Gaeshi wouldn't work here when it would be super effective. I know this was written before Sasaki became The Savior of France, but winged enemies just melt into blood when reflected in Aoe Bichu's blade.
Dragons are just oversized swallows.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/29
Yeah, that's stupid. Coming so soon as the second chapter it is only annoying.
| Guest chapter 79 . 11/28
It's alive! I have to admit I was a bit worried during the Black Cats' encounter...thankfully Sachi managed to avoid the bad end this time!