Reviews for Next Great Adventure Edge of the Abyss
paulmoss chapter 5 . 5/11
Loving this story. Keep up the good work.
aneeqabi12345 chapter 5 . 5/10
when is the next chapter coming im getting really into this story.
mxcalibur chapter 3 . 3/13
Wonderful Story!, You don't get enough appreciation for your written work.
Guest chapter 5 . 2/14
harry could travel back in time and stop the weapon dump from happening allowing the kroguns to evolve past the medieval stage.
Guest chapter 3 . 12/27/2014
Please fix the format
shugokage chapter 5 . 12/29/2014
Great job on this story!
Outcaste chapter 6 . 12/16/2014
Type your review for this chapter here...
moosejuice5 chapter 3 . 12/15/2014
Yeah, this chapter is just a solid block of text with absolutely no spacing - I couldn't read this.
Darman Skirata chapter 6 . 12/12/2014
That's great hear that your mom is going to be alright, my younger sister had a bout of Osteosarcoma, she's fine, fully recovered, but she was not happy she needed chemotherapy. So it's good to hear that she's fine.
Michae1ange1o chapter 6 . 12/12/2014
Damn glad to hear about your mother, I hate cancer with a vengence, lost a good portion of my family to it. Best wishes.
Deicide73 chapter 3 . 12/12/2014
You need to reset the formatting and re upload this chapter, it's a completely unreadable wall of text.
Other than that you story looks good so far.
Lord of the Pit chapter 5 . 12/5/2014
Looking forward to the update.
Infernus est in animo chapter 3 . 11/10/2014
Dude yo formatting be fucked!
jgkitarel chapter 3 . 11/9/2014
Ok, you really need to fix the formatting of this chapter. Seriously. Everything is just a wall of text.
Guest chapter 3 . 11/7/2014
Chapter 3 is nothing but a wall of text. Please add spaces.
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