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fujinakaheero chapter 12 . 4/19
quite enjoyed the reference to VC Andrews. I enjoyed that series even though it was very... messed up lol.
Awesome fanfic. :D
Tori chapter 12 . 4/16
Brilliant epilogue :) Thank you! I awwwwwwww-ed so much! xxx
Sarah G chapter 12 . 4/13
Absolutely loved this! What an amazing epilogue, it was like a mini story in itself. I loved every single bit of it from beginning to end.
Not sure of any suggestions yet...but would of course love to read more drabbles or one shots from this universe! Pretty please!
Looking forward to anything and everything you write. Thank you for sharing!
Mindymb83 chapter 12 . 4/14
Hi JLaLa!

This was a great ending! I just laughed so hard! This story made me laugh so much from beggining to end! But it has also made me cry... and that is why I loved it so much! I would love to read more about this AU!


PeemaDarzy chapter 12 . 4/13
Aww! What a beautiful ending to a great story!
So sweet and so funny in the same time. Lizzy's pov was hilarious. I may or may not envisioned them literally jumping on the bed.
Also, for the literature reference I think my username says it all! So what better than Peeta naming his daughters after the notorious Bennet sisters!
I hope to read more of that universe... Like Lizzy to find out what her parents were really up to... I 'd love ro see Peeta as a father of teenage girls! Haha
Thank you for this lovely story!
Shellibug chapter 12 . 4/12
This was a perfect epilogue - everyone got their happy ending! I loved the parts from Lizzie's POV too - so sweet and innocently hilarious, embarrassing her parents by over sharing!
Thank you so much for a wonderful read :)

I would love to read more from this universe so can I request a drabble with Katniss and Prim giggling about their Mellark brothers please? I still laugh aloud whenever I remember Will and Cal overhearing Katniss tell Prim about Peeta's glorious cock!

I would also like to know more about Prim and Will and how their relationship developed/deepened or how Finnick and Annie adapt to being parents.
Or how Effie and Haymitch discovered they were expecting and worked out they both assumed the other provided the contraception!
Basically anything from the universe - I love all the characters and pairings you wrote in this touching, funny and sexy story! x
colleenegan25 chapter 12 . 4/11
Ahh! I loved this whole story. The fact that it was told in Lizzie's POV was hilarious! I loved the "jumping on the bed" references. You tied everything together beautifully! I would love to read more in this universe. :)
S chapter 12 . 4/11
That is probably like the longest epilogue I have ever seen, and I am so glad that it is so long, so worth the wait! It was awesome, so glad that they are moving back home, but it is sad to see them uproot the life Lizzie knows. The drama back home is kinda intense, but glad to see that Cal settled and Will and Prim might be a thing. And another Everlark baby! Yes! Totally perfect, and I can't believe that there is also a Hayffie baby. Amazing story, thank you so much for it. I went on a roller coaster yesterday of feels with this story and it was perfect. Can't wait to see what you have next!
PatronusDawn chapter 12 . 4/11
I actually enjoyed it very much :) so yayy, thank you
Norbert's Mom chapter 12 . 4/11
I read this story from beginning to end today. It's so sweet and touching and hilarious. Thank you for sharing it.
S chapter 11 . 4/11
Everlark baby is here! I know I said yesterday that I wouldn't be able to read this chapter and the epilogue, but I kinda had to finish the story off. So yay for rebellious me! Awesome chapter, kinda sad to see them leave their family, but I love the little hospital part where Peeta kinda loses it. :P But the tiny bit of one month later was perfect, I can't wait to fully read the epilogue (I mostly skimmed it yesterday).
Poiuytreza chapter 12 . 4/11
Thank you so much for this story: it's clearly one of my favourites! I love all your characters and their evolutions (I'm particularly happy that Prim doesn't end with Rory, it would have been too easy)
and thank to have end it properly, and not forgotten it as some others can do...
bellaxbyxdefault chapter 12 . 4/11
It's always sad to see something so beautiful end but the story was absolutely great
christyjosh4eva chapter 12 . 4/10
Yay! What an awesome ending to the story! I loved it! Lizzie is so freaking adorable and so smart! She was awesome and so funny! The things she said omg I can't! Especially the whole jumping on the bed thing! Hehe ;) and they are having another baby and it's a girl! Yay! And prim and will together aww so cute! I'm happy that everything worked out for them! :) so again awesome sauce story!
S chapter 10 . 4/10
I think has to be my favorite wedding ever, I have no idea why, though. Okay, yes, I do cause the mothers all giving Kat something while she's in labor was kinda awesome. And I love the bachelor(ette) parties and how the parents still have it. :D And drunken Gale and Jo revenge was perfect, I could not stop laughing!

I can't believe that the baby is coming, I'm going to have to read it, unfortunately, tomorrow. :( Couldn't finish it all today it seems and so close, too! But it was absolutely amazing, obviously.
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