|Reviews for Waiting|
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
Let him know who's in charge;D Nice work, keep writing
| Lost O'Fallon Girl chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
I absolutely loved what you did with this. I absolutely loved it. It is not what I expected when it came to Narcissa but when I thought about it. It was her. I could see her being charge of everything House Related. I could see her the one making all the choices to do with the home, I could see her arranging parties and whatnot within the Malfoy House, like in the old English society. As that is how I see Pure-bloods. They keep to traditions.
Great work Schwans.
Your Team Captain
| your broken things chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
Nicely done...it was an interesting take on Narcissa and you wrote it really well. xx
| Vivien Lestrange chapter 1 . 10/6/2013
This is a fascinating take on Narcissa.
There is this Wrock-song about them called "Please come home tonight" but your Narcissa is much less complacent. I like how confident she is and she does get her wish in the end. An only child called Draco. ;) I think it's not that unlikely that she is indeed in charge of some matters, she obviously decided where Draco would go to school according to the book.
Good story, I might begin to like the Malfoys after all with the stories I've recently read.