The amount of bullshit you’re pulling out of your ass at the end of this chapter… lmao finally an author who doesn’t need his mc’s abilities while saying “I don’t want him to get too strong too quickly” thank you so much author-san

let's be honest here, you got the idea for the fragmented soul from Harry Potter and Voldemorts horcruxes.

ruined this

I just want the basic concept, and the relational developments between the guys and their girls.

over the rather silly idea for background story, interesting.

I see you nerfing your story’s Minato’s image-integrity, while paving the way for this Kushina to really be loving on this Nar...

Offer the Fuuma to be retainers to the Fuhen?

he meant ‘Roachy-chan’. Hardy-har

realize that if they started flooding the economy with gold and diamonds, as well as other valuables, that it would cause an economic dishevelment.
The system would need to stabilize, as an unaccounted influx of such moneys would inflate the cost of living, due to the lessening value of the moneys, and the increasing value of goods.
Of course, that is, if it’s enough to do thusly.

Wouldn’t Nar and his clan-mates’ byakugan and sharingan merge?

Leading to Mikoto and Kushina being with this Nar?
After all, due to probable genetic variance and his “bloodlines”, he’s essentially more of a cousin to both of them at this point.
(Minus the birth part involving Kushi.)

we get to the Uzu and Kushina.

I just head-it in that Nar and his peers are aged up to 14-16. Just more fitting

How everyone, including Oro, find mutual enjoyment from seeing Jir be the focus of the joke. Just, wow

More lore friendly, the Raikage’s bodyguard would be Darui.
Samui happens to be one of Kirabi’s student-team members.
Plus, I think she should be with Nar. (Yes, I’m still harping on that...)