Reviews for Naruto Chaos Mage
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 46 . 8/8
huh
Rebmul chapter 45 . 7/10
well hes gona get raped when he gets back
Light 'Kira' Yagami chapter 21 . 5/23
after doing the math considering he sleeps 8 hours a day and trains only in his mindscape he has 4838400.00548 years of training... thats fucked up
Light 'Kira' Yagami chapter 11 . 5/20
fe ion increases body speed reduces *slow clap* SCIENCE! BIOLOGY!
Lord Damon Markloff Darkling chapter 46 . 4/19
Well, shit
the naru foxxx chapter 3 . 4/3
I can't read any more the constant grammar mistakes and miss spellings I could handle but the line do you mean the theft was just a make believe was 5he final straw, it was so bad I couldn't read it with out cringing when I tried to read it out loud I couldn't do it without breaking out into laugher.
MGStarFire chapter 2 . 1/11
when 50 kage bunshin explode the victim of theattack desn't lose conciousness they die.
THEY DIE AND THERE IS NOTHING LEFT OF THEIR BODIES WHY THE HELL IS MIZUKI JUST UNCONCIOUS!
Notsae chapter 13 . 1/2
He could kill the whole team and go rouge. Hell, he could slaughter the council and everyone he doesn't like; then either go rouge or have the now uncontested sandaime pardon him.
Notsae chapter 11 . 1/1
Wouldn't Naruto's name (Uzumaki) change to Fuhen to reflect his new status. Clan names are last names.
Notsae chapter 8 . 12/31/2016
Couldn't magic cancel kill by shutting down people's chakra coils.
bavintugeef chapter 19 . 11/30/2016
lol gotta love auto correct Orochimaru into Parochialism [although I guess narrow minded could apply to Orochimaru because of his focus on learning all the jutsu in the world]
iamjmph01 chapter 9 . 11/17/2016
as to my last reply it could just be my old computer acting up. When i hit refresh everything was there, but when i checked other stories it had the same issue, sorry to bother you with this...
iamjmph01 chapter 8 . 11/17/2016
something seems to have happened to this story, ive noticed it before but several parts of this chapter, and others, just seem to be missing. For example, when the conversation about why Hiashi is such a prick happens, parts of it are just not there. It really breaks things up in a bad way.
Silent Analyst chapter 2 . 11/6/2016
This fic has not aged well
SPark681 chapter 46 . 10/26/2016
Damn nice starter to this story man gonna start reading the next part once this post is done anyways keep up the great work!
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