|Reviews for Children of Loss|
| Guest chapter 60 . 11/29/2020
I come back to this story every so often. It is just full of character and I love it. I enjoy every time I read it again.
| barrios.vpaz chapter 60 . 8/16/2020
This is definetely the best fanfic i've ever read like i cried as a baby at 5am in a school night. God, it was absolutely perfect. I have no words more than GIVE THIS A TRY!
| bananahead1 chapter 6 . 5/18/2020
better than what I thought I thought they were selling their bodies
| evieaw12 chapter 60 . 7/16/2019
Omg! I don't normally reviewwell, I review like NEVERbut this story was AMAZING. Way way better than 99% of any other book I've ever read, published or online. The next bit is basically going to be a rant of everything I loved so...
Your characters were so realistic and well developed, and I grew to know and care for each and every one! I love the way you didn't introduce them all at once, and let your readers find out more about them gradually. The EMOTIONS you fed into this story... Wow. It made me laugh and cry a LOT! Your storyline was so so interesting and it amazes me to see the variety of AUs people can come up with for fanfics. Lastly, the plot twists were INSANE! The story never got boring and kept me hooked right until the end.
So annoying most of the smut got taken out (we love a good dose of smutbut by far one of the best stories I've read. Can't wait to read the next one!
| Guest chapter 59 . 7/10/2018
Omgggggg I actually LOVE this fic! It made me cry soooo many times and I loved the slight smut! There was such a good storyline, even though that plot twist at the end KILLED me
| Quirky.angel chapter 60 . 4/13/2018
AMAZING! Thank you. I loved this and will definitely keep as a favorite to reread later on
| Quirky.angel chapter 58 . 4/12/2018
look here, I am not ok with what just happened. I have invested too much time into this for them to not all have happy endings. why, just why? how could you?
| Quirky.angel chapter 32 . 4/10/2018
awww I'm just now finding this story and I'm loving it. I'd hate to realize this wasn't the original story. like literally I've lost sleep the last few nights reading your story. I am in love with your writing. please keep writing
damn people no one is forcing you to read shit, haters need to just leave. I love me some sexy Nico
| Epek chapter 60 . 1/6/2018
I can’t think of good enough words to describe the fanfiction
| Guest chapter 60 . 12/27/2017
Honestly this was the first fanfic I ever read and I just keep coming back to it again and again. It'll probably always be my favorite one, as well as one of the most well written fanfics I've ever come across. So once again I have to review, this fic is everything I could've wanted in this AU and more and just amazing work as always. I don't think I'll ever get tired of reading children of loss.
| Aijo123 chapter 60 . 9/10/2017
I LOVE THIS SO SO SO SO SO SO MUCH! Reading this fic made me really happy and i really loved it! I stayed up later than usual to finish this fic but i saved the last chapter for when i was not half asleep. I think this has to be my favorite Nico/Percy fic yet and i am looking foward to reading more of your work!
| Guest chapter 60 . 4/17/2017
Wow, this was absolutely amazing!
| Darkness Death and Riches chapter 60 . 3/26/2017
First off, I want to say that I'm irritated with my habit of not reviewing chapter by chapter when it's a completed work, because I have SOOOO much more to say about everything than I can ever remember for this blurb. I love all of the characters, it feels like they just jumped off the pages into this AU, and I enjoyed how you wrote them. My favorite has to be Eros, because he just is. My fault when reading is that I see myself as all of the characters, but mainly as the main character. So like, I empathize with the characters and their dilemmas and reactions, but I see all the main characters choices as my own. So there were times when Nico was just plain stupid in my books, and I was like "See, if I would've been in that situation I would've done this instead to save myself all the drama." However, if I were in the situation I probably wouldn't have gotten Percy to like me, so kudos for Nico. I love how with my one highschool year of French, three years of Latin, and knowledge of the English language I could understand a lot of Eros' French, and my favorite thing was honestly the "chaise lounge chair" in like chapter 53 or something, because chaise lounge is actually chaise longue, so literally it's "chair long chair", and it made me chuckle. I love this story so much! I read it on AO3, and I can't review over there so here I am. Literally, I couldn't put the story down I was that hooked. You are an amazing author, and you're going to go far in life with your writing ability! Please update House of the Wicked as soon as possible, and I can't wait for it to make print (because I have the utmost confidence that it will!)!
| Lord Nitro chapter 47 . 3/5/2017
I don't know why, the past 2 times I've read this story I haven't cared much for Persephone. I liked her as a character, but I never felt any sort of attachment, or bond or anything. She was just...there. She was like Mitchell Ice Cream, you could tolerate it, but you wouldn't seek it out.
Then I read it for a third time. I feel interested in Persephone, I feel intrigued by her and what she brought, and it has given me a desire for more. I don't know why, either. It's not like the Persephone in anything has appealed, like Nyx does. That's why I'm fascinated/obsessed with Nyx in house, because I just love Nyx in general, but I've never felt like that for Persephone, and I still don't. Only in this, and in House, does Persephone now appeal to me.
| Lord Nitro chapter 34 . 3/1/2017
Aphrodite me lovesssss