Reviews for Children of Loss
SPN-DayDreamer chapter 1 . 7/7/2016
I read this entire story on your site dedicated to this but wanted to leave a note here for all future potential readers:
Hands down one of the best fanfiction stories I've ever read. The author's original, alternate universe feels so engrossing and complete. The characters shared between the books and this story have the true core characteristics of themselves without any other burdens of canon or simplification - the author took those core concepts and really fleshed out his/her own deep personalities and back stories. Every character feels worthy of his or her own story and relationship. It's an ensemble cast without the simplification of plot or character that normally comes with that.

The emotion and feels - ugh - so good. I was just utterly amazed by how much the author wrote and how long the story went without feeling like I'm wading through fluff (not a bad thing to wade through though :)) or suffering through overly detailed exposition or introspection. The first chapter gripped me and didn't let me go ever again, each reveal and twist being just as anxiously awaited as the previous.

While it is very dark, it's dark with a purpose, a plot, and a positive light in the end.

Andy chapter 6 . 6/30/2016
You should of made NICO look like he didn't care about what happens between Percy and Apollo
Ayana94321798 chapter 35 . 6/28/2016
Going through these reviews I just hate how people feel bad for the Lost Kids. Don't ever defend rudeness or people who others like crap. Which is pretty much how they treated Nico. Jealously/Envy really is one of the seven deadly sins. Trying to embarrass Nico and make him fail was not going to make him like them in the slightest. And the punishment Percy gave them was weak. But then again, Percy is just as ducked up as the rest of them.
Lord Nitro chapter 6 . 6/11/2016
I think it would've been funny if Nico let Thalia in but then Percy and or Apollo try to get in and he slams it on them :P
littlelady230 chapter 60 . 5/31/2016
Thank you for all the effort and time you put into this. one of the best fanfictions I have read.
sandy-ramen-thief chapter 57 . 5/11/2016
I love this story. Seriously. And I probably should've said this sooner, but holy cow I love the whole Luke/Eros thing! Gahhh so great. Ohh and by the way, could you do another story, short even, about Nico and Luke? (Erm. I suppose I should check to see your other stories already first. Eheh, I'll get right on that _)
WantDelete chapter 43 . 4/30/2016
Well, this chapter was a bunch of emoti ons. The last part of Percy's letter left me all... I don't even how to define it. It's just too much happiness even though maybe it's not what I'm thinking aboutHow many times do I have to say this story is really awesome ? Well, let's say that againthanks for that amazing fanfiction ! :D
WantDelete chapter 37 . 4/29/2016
I don't even know what to say after reading this chapter. My mind was just empty... Hell, what the hell was that ?! Poor Lost Kids D8' Still an amazing story !
SugarSpice chapter 55 . 4/24/2016
You know... This chapter has made me lose my liking of spicy foods. And I'm Indian. But I don't regret it a bit, since this is sooo good. It is the mark of a good author to persuade a person that they have never met, to change their habits due to the reader reading the author's work. Especially if it is something that they have practiced their whole lives. Good job!
WantDelete chapter 29 . 4/23/2016
I haven't read half the story yet but I wanted to say that it's really awesome. Even though, the universe is quite cruel, the characters are very endearing. I wonder what's going on behind all of that, there's so much mystery... Thank you for sharing this story !
Guest chapter 60 . 4/10/2016
I first finished this story last year. I loved it then. This year I finished it again. I still love it. In short, it is one of the best stories I have ever read. I will read again next year. I will love it again.
8andit0 chapter 60 . 4/10/2016
This story was absolutely amazing. I have not read a story like this ever before and I am so glad that I got. Please don't ever stop writing.
Guest chapter 60 . 3/30/2016
Holy shit that last chapter was awesome you are without a doubt the best writer I have found on this website my favorite fanfic
Guest chapter 60 . 3/14/2016
You should make a sepquel.
Brokenbyangels chapter 31 . 3/4/2016
You have a very good story line with solid means of moving around each line. You tie things together very well and your style is interesting to read. It's too bad about what happens with the Lost Boys. I think you should Nico try and "fix" them. Oh, and look up "Lost Boys" by Ruth B if you haven't already!:)
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