Reviews for Tell Me
Kmomof4 chapter 1 . 6/3
Very sweet and cute... and Regina's comment at the end was PRICELESS!
crazy-wild-and-free chapter 1 . 4/3/2016
The bonding between Killian and Emma was nice to read. They were very much in character here.

The ending with Regina grumbling to herself was a nice humorous surprise.

I truly enjoyed this OS! Nicely done.
kay1 chapter 1 . 9/11/2015
Oh beautiful during the hiatus I am lucky to Get to your beautiful stories
TashaRose chapter 1 . 3/3/2014
ROFL about Regina's last comments. I could completely believe her saying that. LOL.

Excellent one shot!
Queen of Night chapter 1 . 1/8/2014
Loved it!
Lisa1972 chapter 1 . 12/23/2013
*giggle*
xXxWolvesInTheNightxXx chapter 1 . 12/10/2013
I loved Regina's comment at the end! :D
Tadpole24 chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Really lovely little moment between our two favourites :) Totally believable and possible and oh how I wish we got to see all the moments like this on our screens!

Thank you for sharing!

Emma
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capswanfan chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
I love this and locve captainswan...best ouat story I've read in awhile had 2review
Juliet Knighly chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Regina's line, lol. It was an awesomesauce story! Captainswan is my otp for OUAT, so i loved it!
AllisonSwan chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Love this so much!
citigirl13 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Loved it, especially the last line.
Willofthewisp chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
This is gorgeous. I have yet to get tired of this episode.

"Even with their differences, Emma was happy to have her along for the battle to get Henry back: even though her dependency on magic was almost their undoing."-Well, I guess conjuring a magical fire could make up for all the stupid decisions Regina has made so far. Glad Emma's not too hard on her (for now).

"He was just... Him."-There you go. That describes the greatest success of the show, when one of their characters fully becomes their own. I love how nuanced you give her realization that he is a real person to her and not someone in a story.

"No," he said with a smirk. "But its a lovely thought, isn't it?"-Lol! He had me going.

"What a pair they made, their body language almost identical..."-I noticed this too. Good eyes! Your writing creates a very vivid picture. Good use of voice and description.

"Skittish like wild animal filled with fear upon realizing a threat was upon them."-Aw. Vulnerable Emma tugs my heart strings. I do hope she'll eventually let him in a little. I love that he wants to know her past as much as her present.

"A small part of me wonders what would have happened if they kept me"-Hee hee, there are a ton of AU fics out there for that very purpose. That was bad, I should stay serious. I love what you've done with Emma's voice. Too many times people don't know her well enough to capture her voice, so they just make her angry and snarky all the time and she's not like that. Well, I don't think the snarkiness will ever go away, but they are walls she puts up at various heights depending on the situation and who she's with. You give her sentences a lovely flow while keeping it in-character.

"Dammit, she did NOT want to cry, but he was speaking the damn truth. She was certain of it, and he had a point: in the end her parents had protected her from a vicious curse and for all she knew she could have been Regina's prize in the end. The thought of Regina being the one raising her sent a chill down her spine. Hook was right, without all the mishaps and missteps she wouldn't have Henry."-The beautiful, bittersweet irony that is Emma Swan's life right there. I could never write this as concisely as you have. This would have been twice as long with a ton of sentences that could have been cut. And all the while I feel the closeness between them...wanting them so badly to close the gap...

"...was her final 'I love you' to the father of her child nothing but a heat of the moment proclamation?"-Yeah, that would be my diagnosis!

"She placed her head on his shoulder, relaxing against him. He tensed for only a moment before shifting, wrapping an arm around her to help ward off the chill of the night."-AWWWW! I would love to see this!

"Don't ruin the moment."-Ha ha, that's exactly what I was thinking when I read that.

Shut up, Regina! This was awesome!
ConstantlySleepy chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
tehee so many props to you for that last line, totally adorable :D
aej1085 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
I loved it! Great oneshot!
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