Reviews for Betrayal
Guest chapter 1 . 5/5/2018
all that over a waffle? what a fucking brat
socialgirl378 chapter 1 . 3/20/2017
Sucks to be Dipper. XD
willam and jack and jake chapter 1 . 3/14/2016
lol nice
LittleAmberAmethyst chapter 1 . 1/9/2016
That was an unexpected twist, but a funny one. It's in character and true to the show's humor.
Ford.Ye.Fiji chapter 1 . 10/12/2015
*sigh* MABEEEELLLLLLLLLL. :D
Annie Park chapter 1 . 8/15/2015
Oh, woah! I can't breathe, God! This is simply hilarious! Really, I can't stop laughing. More fics like this, please! HAHA. :D
Alysia Of The Pen chapter 1 . 4/28/2015
Clever use of perspective here! And a strong characterization moment for Mabel (and Dipper). Short but good!
Kraven the Hunter chapter 1 . 3/26/2015
Just switch plates with her, man. However bad dry waffles may be, they can't be worse than having to listen to the Narrator.

PS: Alex, if you're reading this, put this in an episode.
lennoxmacduffes chapter 1 . 2/22/2015
Too much syrups races for it to last that long
Princess-of-the-Pen chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
lol. At first I thought it was something serious like him dating Pacifica behind her back but the silliness of these situations made the story so much better.
Omega Ultra chapter 1 . 10/20/2014
*Claps* You sir have caused me to laugh in the middle of a library. Great job, this was hilarious!
Anna chapter 1 . 10/12/2014
I was thrown off by the use of first-person but I really liked how you integrated a different POV. Very impressed.
Shmez chapter 1 . 9/15/2014
Your fanfics are great! They are like real episodes except for Mabel wanting the faires to die for being gross that was kinda off but aside from that good job
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2014
Hahahah niiiice :D
Ket chapter 1 . 2/19/2014
Ahahaha, Priceless! I love it!
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