Reviews for In the Still of the Night
andrewpine chapter 1 . 11/1
Love your Alice see when Jasper kills her i wonder?
Khyharah chapter 2 . 4/10
So cute. I love Alice getting her ass kicked lol. And that end paragraph! Very poignant. Excellent job!
IAmAPug chapter 1 . 4/10
I totally agree about the whole Alice thing. I would tell her to fuck off, personally.
litanolastar chapter 2 . 3/9
Love it!
galyardt chapter 2 . 3/1
This was so cute and sweet I wish that there was more
Erin-Maltas137 chapter 1 . 2/22
love your version of jasper finding his mate, but how can you hate the notebook?
Sakihinata chapter 2 . 1/25
That was a beautiful story ;)
AHealingRenaissance chapter 2 . 1/21
Bwahahahaha! That was a breath of fresh air :D
Silent Serinade chapter 1 . 11/8/2014
There is a lot of unnecessary repetition in this story. There are things said twice in a row that could be cut.

I would also consider a grammar edit. These things will help with pacing. I'm loving the premise.

Silent Serinade
Emmaline Haesel chapter 1 . 10/3/2014
I never realised it until now, but Alice is a stalker-pixie! And Bell/Jazz is my OTP, too.
X.summergrey.X chapter 2 . 8/27/2014
I very much like this story. so cute and adorable. little shocking that alice died but her greed and jealousy sealed her fate.
Inlovewithjazz chapter 2 . 8/11/2014
What a brilliant story! Wish it were longer!
babygirl2928259 chapter 2 . 6/7/2014
love it
babygirl2928259 chapter 1 . 6/7/2014
silversimon chapter 2 . 5/26/2014
Very charming little ficlet. Thanks for sharing.
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