Reviews for Graceful Death
An Author's Pen chapter 1 . 6/12/2011
The wording is beautiful, you slip through the piece like the Persian stalks through the grass.

This story isn't saying that Persian is evil, it is saying Persian is a hunter.

I feel other reviews have already said what I would say.

To whoever Tola Burke is, what you said about

"In the eyes of hunters is a dangerous innocence..." sums it up.
xPokex chapter 1 . 5/20/2010
Indeed, a new way of showing the 'wild side' of a Persain. Very, very beautifully worded. The words are very emotive I have to say, powerful and very to the point. It get's right at you with every step. I may not be the biggest fan of your reviews but I sure do enjoy your short but powerful, creative stories. Simple yet compassionate.
Illusion-Factory chapter 1 . 11/14/2009
It's best to think of pokemon as slightly smarter then average superpowered animals. That being said, I loved this one. Reminds me of a tiger! or lion or something...yeah...
Dabrikishaw chapter 1 . 9/7/2007
o my god please stop
Cacarukanot signed in chapter 1 . 9/1/2007
Holy-Psychic-Vulpix, SHUT THE F*ING HELL UP. NOW.

There are no words angry enough to describe what I'm feeling against you now.


Farla's writing about something other than 'OMFG PERSIANS ARE EVIL LOLOLOLOLZ', which is what you seem to be getting out of this.

Shut up.
DW-Chaos WolfEdge chapter 1 . 10/31/2006
Whoa, not bad! I've always liked vicious Pokes! This is the story of yours I've read so far, and I already like what I see! Anyway, Persian doesn't seem evil, just hunting to survive. I'm sure I would do the same if I were one... scratch that, ANYONE would do the same. It comes with the insticts after all. I only have one word for this, Nice. keep up the good work!
UnluckyAmulet chapter 1 . 9/16/2006
I really liked this. Persian is a highly under-rated pokemon and most of the time they're always spoilt, pampered things, and I really like the take on hunter.
Lil Ida a MeowthPersian nut chapter 1 . 1/18/2006

This is unbelievable. Never saw THIS side of my favorite Pokemon before.

Then again, I HAVE been spoiled by the anime for a long time...

Anyway, great one-shot. Meow. .0.
Tsunamimbw chapter 1 . 8/10/2004
You certainly do like picking apart the pokemon world do you?

Who doesn't?

Certainly a new way to look at a Persian since the only persian you see is the one Giovanni keeps fawning over.

That sentence was odd.

Well, those little writers who write happy.

They only see the surface.



*random thought* don't you hate sparks?

Spark mini flames.

"This is Shit."

Or mini reviews?

"Good. Update"

~Yeah. Whatever.


~Signing off, Tsunamimbw : Queen of Dots.
Alur3n chapter 1 . 8/4/2004
This is very well written, I actually felt like I was listening to Persian, rather than reading off of a computer screen, visualized the image of the Pokemon hunting it's prey.

You are excellent at getting in to character...
doomofevil chapter 1 . 6/29/2004
HOW many people come to you saying that are no evil poke'mon? I'd rather not ask. Can you post another one of these angst fics?
Kururu soucho boy chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Good job.
3656754278737 chapter 1 . 10/22/2002
I think you captured the essence of Persian perfectly, here - not 'evil', simply a hunter, who knows nothing else. Good job.
Supermoo chapter 1 . 10/6/2002
How on Earth do you moinky people get evil from this? Do you go up to a lion or something and tell it that it's evil because it hunts to live? Hatchet said that for you to live, something else must die, and it's not like you've never eaten meat before. Seriously, don't go into the "good and evil" thing unless you really know what you're moinky talking about.
Lightning-Strike chapter 1 . 9/23/2002
*satisfied evil smile* Beautifully and perfectly worded. I can't help but love it.
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