|Reviews for World Won't Let Me Go|
| Bruno666 chapter 1 . 2/26
Not rubbish at all. Great story with some great feels.
Thank you for sharing it.
| Girl Wonder 2005 chapter 1 . 12/7/2013
Maybe Tony is a little bit more like Clint than Ziva is Natasha. I just feel like Tony is more capable of self re-invention than Clint is, maybe a little more of a word-man than Clint is and holds them closer than Clint does, a little more eloquent (because despite appearances he actually appreciates and ponders the subtleties and drama and flare and poetry behind those 'classics' he watches). Not that this isn't Tony in your fic - he's very much Tony. I just feel a little more of Clint's weariness in this.
| propelled chapter 1 . 11/1/2013
Not rubbish at all - I loved it. The hypothetical, daydream of an ending did me in emotionally, but honestly, I thought it was phenomenal.
| JustBecause2012 chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
Just found this fic, and it's definitely not rubbish! I liked the list you came up with for Tony (his final item, "see you again," being my favorite). I also like the though of Ziva putting her ninja skills to good use as she travels around finding herself. And, of course, I like the hope of a possible happy ending...which is all I'm asking/hoping for of my show. Thanks for writing!
| Annsan chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
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| Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
This is perfect and exactly how I would want Tony and Ziva to end (or really start...)
| dvd123 chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Gibbs is *just right* here. Lovely.
Tony sending her his own "I will" list piece by piece is quite creative. There's self-deprecating but also humor, so Tony. And his drunken text broke my heart.
I too, like the idea of Ziva traveling to different places to help the less fortunate girls/women with English and self-defense. Her list with her wanting to be a ballerina made me tear up, so it was also nice to see her take up ballet again.
And while they don't actually reunite here, it's still hopeful that they will, and I'm glad.
| Schmaltzy chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Beautiful work. Thanks for posting it.
| Ryalin chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Hardly rubbish. Sad and beautiful and...hopeful. Far more hope that the reality is currently giving me. Thanks for the respite.
| M E Wofford chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
It wasn't rubbish, it was pretty darned good.
Sad but open ended, which is what canon has left us with too.
You did good!
| Loverofallthingsmusic chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Rubbish? Yeah right!
This was absolutely AMAZING! You wrote this so, so beautifully! Great job! :)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
It's after 2am, & this is the last thing I read before sleepy-time. I found your story incredibly sad & poignant; kudos !
| tonyfan31970 chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
not rubbish, not at all. glad you posted this. it was interesting but still hopeful.