Reviews for Highschool Of Heroes
shuujin.takagi chapter 13 . 12/8
Primera vez que leo un fic donde EMIYA se lleva bien con Shiro, me gusta mucho, espero que actualics pronto
Sir Cookie chapter 1 . 11/13
its impossible using shirou's own power to summon the full heroic spirit. only the World can do that, ie gaia or alaya. the holy grail system summons a copy of the heroic spirit and puts them in classes, or containers, to make them easier to manage. so shirou cant summon the actual heroic spirits, so that means that the heroic spirits wont ever remember him summoning them. they will always think that they were summoned for the first time.

also can shirou do install, from prisma illya? cause the class cards just use diluted copies of heroic spirits. in case you dont know, class cards are used to enscapulate the power of a heroic spirit but its power is slightly degraded and the heroic spirit have no egos. also using the card can be done in a few ways. Include uses the power of the class card on a powerful object or mystic code to transform it into that heroic spirit's noble phantasm. for instance the lancer class card turns a mystic code into Gae Bolg. Install is using the power of the class card on your own body. you turn into a degraded mini version of cu chulainn. that would be interesting. overpowered as fuck. but a little more interesting application and canon

Guest chapter 5 . 11/7
GOD DAMN IT! Stop writing "ex." when you want to give a fucking example! It's i.e. I fucking E! Abreviated Latin for id est. Meaning, roughly, "THAT IS." There are so many garbage gramatical mistakes in your writing but, for some reason that one pisses me off the most. Other than shit like that, this fic is actually prety fun in an over the top joke sort of way. Maybe find a beta that speaks English fluently.
Arcivus N. Sense chapter 1 . 10/17
... welp... nevermind...
Arcivus N. Sense chapter 1 . 10/17
... If the seer's prophecy is 100% Accurate... Then the one in the painting is HIM not the one who's about to be born...
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 13 . 10/12
Well, i was sceptical when i first daw this but decided it may surprise me and i am glad i gave it a chance. It has been a hell of a ride.

Not sure why young Shurou keeps asking older Shirou what happens as he wouldnt know either. Given tge fact that he arrived in this world some distance in the past he would know what current events are to come.

Hmm, why no Tamamo? We need Tamamo. It would be amusing for older Shirou to be married to Amatsurasu and young Shirou ends up getting Tamamo (an aspect of Amatsurasu) in his harem. Besides no harem is complete without a foxgirl if they exist in the world.

Pepebomb chapter 13 . 10/8
Love this story please hope To se next chapter
jmcas1121 chapter 1 . 10/4
Because you use filipino terms like alimango is filipino for crab
jmcas1121 chapter 1 . 10/4
are you a filipino?
SteelBlackwing chapter 1 . 10/4
I was hoping to find a serious story about a 40 year old war veteran drenched in blood and pursuing an impossible dream thrust into a much more innocent world where the wars he once fought in are reduced to naught but a game, and he has to cope and adapt. Instead, this is literally Highschool DxD with the names of characters changed. I'm sorely disappointed with how this story ended up.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/26
You've written that this basically is a 40 year old Archer influenced by the 7 year old Shirou. So far, including the last part here, the exact opposite is the case, even if Archer is 'just acting' it doesn't seem that way.
noddwyd chapter 13 . 9/26
noddwyd chapter 1 . 9/25
username7410 chapter 13 . 9/21
hahaha the shenanigens keep getting crazier and i love it
Raymond Lightbringer chapter 13 . 9/17
damn! Shirou's too OP! What a good chapter. Thanks.
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