The designer of EMIYA alter most probably read this fanfic XD

This guy created a proto servant universe before it was even a thing, damn. I don't know whether you'll see new reviews since it's been 7 years but a lot of people would very much appreciate if you continued this.

updateeee

Man he is cold af

Though, I hate a pervy shirou... Doesn't fit with me... Well, the invisible laws of OC's

Pixelitus
If you can face the fact that this fic does not follow canon or Shirou is op as the beyonder here, then you shouldn't have read it.
I, love op shirou fics, I've grown tired of seeing the same old shirou who cannot to a simple thing without anyone's help in all FSN routes.

Not that it's his fault; his naive dad thought he could keep shirou away from the moonlit world and taught him flawed magecraft, something that obviously derailed him during the HGW; it only he could have told shirou everything, shirou would have fought that war like a professional taking into account he had over 10yrs to train; and don't get me started on Shirou's environment and the people around shirou, they don't compliment his element and growth... Shirou element is sword, nobody around him can help him grow stronger in that aspect, and don't give me the saber card, she can't help shirou grow.
I mean can you imagine shirou who has the most perfect foundation for being one of the strongest swordsman to ever walk Gaia(element sword, origin sword) using only saber's style as a base forme... That's hubristic. What I expected is that he modify his skill with all the skill gotten from the swords he traced. Shirou doesn't need a big and badass conceptual sword to be the strongest most skilled swordsman of his era, or even better than arturia or sasaki kojiro (I won't say Gil, he is an archer after all, with only basic swordsmanship- check the wiki for proof)

It's like Nasu got something against shirou or I don't understand, except oath under the snow, shirou was more like the supporting character in all FSN routes(the heroines being the mc's) and it's annoying.

Ive been reading the part where shirou and hellel Are all comfortable and lovey dovey with eachother. This soft romance full of trust and understanding is just so beautiful Ive read it too many times for the serotonin

It is sad that you never continue, but at least this saga told us something

So Shirou without arm will work the power necessary to become the god,
He will have his harem, but he will lose them at later date when he go to past. And have a new wife.

It will be sad for his family to lose him.

Well he can’t polish his sword, but now he has willing participants into do that themselves, so he really won’t need it, also it could be better so he stop the stupid form he us to get the girls without getting them, because is like he is laughing at them. They want time with him! They want dates, beautiful words, thoughtful gifts and cuddles and sex, lot of that!

Honestly i would shed some tears myself

I…love the crack in this fic. I really do. But I just don’t think I can handle it anymore. Thank you for blessing us with this fic, and goodbye.

“"Peace loving justice freaks are always fun to watch" Shiro cracks a relaxed yet diabolical smile "And to think I was like that in the past... How humiliating"”

Yay for going against the entirety of Shirou’s character…god I hate that. Yeah, I think I’m definitely just skipping all fight scenes from here on out.

“It actually reminded her of Ea.”

No. Just no.

At this point, I’m tempted to just skip all the fight scenes in this fic when one starts.

“It does not exist in this world, thus cannot be traced.”

THAT ISN’T EVEN HOW THAT FUCKING WORKS-ok. Just breathe.

“The one that he used is Surtr: The Blazing Sword of Ragnarok, which was named after the god who wields it.”

…wait, but I thought Shirou was only able to trace Divine Constructs as hollow shells, and only in Oath Under Snow…

“There is simply no place for a God in this world.”

…I-I have no words.

“This larger than life of a man is Alexander D. Great, a famed sage of the gaming world and one of 2 leaders of the GOB along with Gilles De Rias. While Gilles is considered as the brain of the organization, Alexander is the face and voice.”

Pfft-perfect. Also, One Piece reference? It fits.

God, when there’s no combat, I really do like this story.

“The moment Akiko entered the thin corridor, Shiro slammed his fists into the walls causing hundreds of blades to sprout, effectively turning the corridor into a gigantic Iron Maiden.”

That…isn’t how his powers even work-

"STRIKE AIR!"

Isn’t that Arturia’s move-

Wait, how the *fuck* is Shirou turning his body into blades? I know he can make many tiny blades to stitch his wounds together, but if you’re pulling a HF Shirou, then he should be…I don’t even know how to describe it, but it’s bad.

OP Shirou is, of course, as always, disgusting Shirou. I much prefer the other parts of the story outside of combat and everyone constantly praising Shirou.

You know what, I’m just going to ignore all the Fate lore and mechanics I’ve learned so far, and just read this story with my brain as blank as a new blanket.

“RULER & BEAST- Amaterasu (yes, she can wear 2 armors at the same time)”

…how the *fuck* do you wear two different sets of armor at once. Also, what about the like 10 other extra classes?

How the fuck does *Arthur-motherfucking-Pendragon* lose to someone like Shirou Emiya? That’s impossible in basically every way. And Shirou’s magic circuits are *way* too sucky to do stuff like that usually unless he’s getting mana from someone else like in UBW, and even then, it’d be hard to do outside of his Reality Marble, and that’s not even how Kanshou and Byakuya work, and how would Shirou learn an entirely new magecraft randomly when it takes years of training and practice for it-right, right. Brain off. Fuck. This is going to be harder than I thought. Still, this is…painfully OOC and OP. I love the concept, but it’s going to take some effort to go through this. Especially with the shoddy grammar. Also, this obvious time travel thing already kind of makes little to no sense, but hey, I’ll just keep pushing through. Maybe out of nostalgia because I read this before and liked it, but eh.