Reviews for Machina
whack sparrow chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
im gonna read every one of your stories... until there are NONE LEFT!1111
iskaen chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
This is awesome, but I feel like there's a paragraph or two missing, right before the one that starts with, "He steadied her as she reached for the control pad." It took me several paragraphs more to figure out what and where the door was, and I didn't realize Scout had been shot until the band-aid scene much later.

(Sorry for the double post - I managed to post the first one while logged out _)
Guest chapter 1 . 10/21/2013
This is awesome, but I feel like there's a paragraph or two missing, right before the one that starts with, "He steadied her as she reached for the control pad." It took me several paragraphs more to figure out what and where the door was, and I didn't realize Scout had been shot until the band-aid scene much later.