Every time i read this chapter in any fanfic and when reading the actual book, want to murder this stupid elf

Thank you. Every few years I read this.
I think , from " the incident" to I'd be happy to compete in a few years, and "It's time" , I think this is the most imaginative H.P. work I've read in the more than a decade since I became semi-adicted to fanfiction.

Once of the best endings to a fic I've ever read. I was actually getting emotional at the end!

Anyone reading reviews and wondering if this one is worth it, definitely give it a go. It'll take a few chapters to get into, but it's 100% worth it.

this kid is NOT emotionless.
literally the first scene we get with him is a huge emotional outburst in the great hall wth

there are a lot of different versions of potter in fanfic, and wildly different versions make sense. internally consistent.

your potter makes no gosh darn sense. hes perfect at everything instantly, there is no learning curve, no stumbling.

he sys wild stuff and people react like he said the perfect thing, when nobody would react like that. it's to such an egregious degree that it removes stakes of any kind from the story.

very difficult to read

thats an EXTREME start to the story, never seen a version of harry waltz into the great hall and strip down to show off how he was abused.

as much as i like brutus the owl, thats such an unrealistic response from a trauma victim i almost dropped the story there

i love Brutus the owl. it will be difficult not patting him

Hermione gets , at best, a C for her "authoriitative"description of some of harry's assets , adjusted to a D for ignorance of the limits of her knowledge about the markets she's talking about.

sad he hasnt tried to be a animagus yet

Oh my what an ending. My favorite by far.

Holy frickin moly. This is such an amazing fic! Had me hooked from the get go with the plot and characters. Have barely been able to stop reading since i started yesterday! Thank you for sharing with us readers this amazing fic, I have spent many happy hours reading through it all ️

We must pat the Brutus, though. If not friend, why friend shaped?

by misleading i mean for those actually searching for those stories, which is counter to what he actual search bar is for

as a policy whenever i see no x, i am no longer reading whatever it is and will point out something incredibly obvious. if it's not labeled as a harem story... then it isn't one, it is obnoxiously redundant and misleading to put that in the description... by isleading

I’m a fan of RW/MW/GW/SS bashing stories but this was refreshing, you sprinkled a little bit of them but not enough to make them any type of main villain characters.

Great ending!