Reviews for Almost Lost
reidfan1971 chapter 6 . 9/22/2014
Really really really good short story. Youve done this episode remake ending very good justice. I have truly enjoyed the whole 6 chptrs :)
Great job !
tannerose5 chapter 6 . 9/21/2014
Yes, I did enjoy reading the story. I couldn't tell you were not a native English speaker.
I hope you have more stories planned. You're going on my "follow" list right now.
tannerose5 chapter 5 . 9/21/2014
Hey, the kid had to try, didn't he? I just love Henry.
tannerose5 chapter 4 . 9/21/2014
That scene was one of my favorite JJ scenes. She's not my favorite, but it seemed heartfelt.
Good chapter.
brokenagentjareau chapter 4 . 5/5/2014
I loved how in the show we found out about JJ reading Rossi's books and that was how she figured out that she wanted to work with the FBI.
brokenagentjareau chapter 3 . 5/5/2014
Not only does Henry need her but so does Spencer...and the rest of the team.

I have an idea for a reave idea for this ending and will be sharing that with you soon (Of course).

"I love you Spence," favorite line ever so far in this story! So much emotion in just four words!

-jennifer
brokenagentjareau chapter 2 . 5/5/2014
I love the clicking sound heels make when I wear them! That was random but of course I had to add that in there!

"My favorite godson." FAVORITE AND ONLY GODSON of the moment (Unless Jack is also her godson but I don't think that was ever mentioned in the show so I don't know)

Spencer blushing! So adorable and cute! I Honestly can picture him blushing.
brokenagentjareau chapter 1 . 5/5/2014
Don't forget to put "" when you are having them speak. Just the thing that I noticed right off the bat. I am looking forward to reading the rest of this...the next two-three chapters that are posted as of this moment :D
spk chapter 4 . 4/26/2014
Love this story! :)
tannerose5 chapter 2 . 12/22/2013
I agree with another reviewer. Use " to show someone is speaking. example: "No coffee for you miss, at least until the doctor says it 's OK."
Because of all the dashes (-), this chapter was extremely confusing to read. You might want to go back and edit this chapter.
I'd like to see Maeve and Reid have a quiet evening together. Spencer deserves some happiness in his life.
tannerose5 chapter 1 . 12/22/2013
I think you did just fine. Keep going.
Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2013
Please use quotation marks. The dashes are annoying as hell. Write like you would write a novel; read a novel for reference. Thank you.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
love it please update!
Doritos my Cheetos chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Looks interesting, can't wait to read more.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/9/2013
Interesting take on it cause if Maeve had lived I imagine she an JJ would be really good friends like her and Reid already are.