Reviews for In His Mind
Guest chapter 1 . 6/26
'I will COUNT!' xD best line I've read in a long time! Love the story as well. Every good!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/17
Hope u write more on thm
Natsuki D chapter 1 . 5/25
So I know some people hate when we do this but... is there gonna be an update or sequel?
Thanks for story
demonweasel1 chapter 1 . 4/5
I wish there was more to this but overall it was so cute and fun to read.
NewMusic098 chapter 1 . 2/8
I feel bad that I laughed at this... ; u ; Poor Natsuuuuuuuuu! Or is he? XDD This is so funny. HAHAHA! XD Still sad that it's complete, though. :v :v Anyway, thanks for the wonderful one-shot!

Ja Ne!
Akiyama7Koharu chapter 1 . 1/2
That was interesting to read! Heheh...
LuckyLucy1257 chapter 1 . 12/31/2014
This chapter is funny, but instead of it being a T-rated story make it into a M-rated one because of Natsu's little thought when he said "Why did I say pound, now I could think about is him being inside me, pon ding me till I can't walk" and more chapters please
need not to know chapter 1 . 12/22/2014
Come on let them have it I mean sex
SoulMore chapter 1 . 12/21/2014
FAN!
blackmistress chapter 1 . 11/10/2014
Loved it!
AsDarknessSpreads chapter 1 . 10/25/2014
I fucking ship them now! XD
Guest chapter 1 . 9/3/2014
*mental nosebleed* Good job Author-chan…
Blackhatred chapter 1 . 6/2/2014
Lol, hilarious ending! Can't wait for more!
This is totally better than GrayxNatsu
spiritgirl16 chapter 1 . 5/16/2014
lol I loved this!pls make morexD
gratsulover117 chapter 1 . 5/7/2014
I would love to see what happens after this but its already complete
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