Reviews for The Kiss
Sara Dobie Bauer chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Love the rapid pace and all the description. Well done!
Septembers Oblivion chapter 1 . 10/27/2013
I liked the first one better, more passion and the way it led to the kiss was better.
And then a second kiss, I imagine they'll be going at it for a few more hours! :)
EJBRUSH1952 chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
I think I enjoyed this ending more than the other-maybe cause it led to the second kiss? Just seemed more like them too. Either way, keep writing-and I'll continue to read, deal?
clejssaasa chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Yay for the kissies !
I absolutely loved both ! I'm going to make a ridiculously fluffy fluff just for you for giving me and Ash so much of it :*
KL08 chapter 2 . 10/10/2013
Both alternatives were amaing ! :D