|Reviews for Die To Save You|
| Princess Unikitty chapter 11 . 3/1
And this was a pretty good chapter too. Liked the dream sequence in the beginning - very surreal.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 10 . 3/1
A pretty chill chapter, though I still liked it.
| Guest chapter 11 . 2/28
Please update soon!
| Faulty L0gic chapter 10 . 2/5
I've really enjoyed the story so far.
I like the setup, I like both fandoms, and Raven was always my favorite Titan.
I really like how you wrote her mindscape. I wonder how enraged Raven compares in power to Aang or Azula...
Rena is adorable.
I like Holly, she's deep enough to avoid a lot of problems people have with OCs, and isn't anywhere near the dreaded Sue territory.
I also liked her relationship with Raven, specifically its pace.
About description, I can't really visualize your OCs very well, but I didn't notice until you asked about them. I just used "default" images.
Torture scene: rock on. Don't tone it down, it was great.
There were some minor mechanical weirdnesses, for example...
[worked through lunch, eating a few bites from children that brought food to them]
...sounds like they're eating the poor children who try to bring them food.
And occasionally it's unclear who is speaking or present.
But neither of those are major issues.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 9 . 1/17
Hm, ruthless torture scene. Okay then
I appreciate seeing Cyborg again... kind of pointless given that we didn't hear much out of him, but it's nice to know that the plot is moving in other areas
| Kitty chapter 8 . 1/14
Raven and Holly's new ship name... Rolly? Haven? Yep I like Haven
| Princess Unikitty chapter 8 . 1/8
She was really the only good part in this chapter since the second scene was pretty dang hollow
| a critical chapter 3 . 12/28/2013
this is horrible the character you added does not abut sense francamentme bored and read whatever aserca put it, I suggest it's not written by ue you starve.
| UnderminetheAuthority chapter 7 . 12/26/2013
This is pretty good! I'm always a fan of Yuri, and this executes it quite well making it unlike a stupid, slutty misinterpretation of it
| Princess Unikitty chapter 7 . 12/26/2013
Hi friend, nice to see you back. This chapter was pretty chill, I like that, it's nice for the action to step aside at times. Your OCs are fine, the romance with Raven (a canon) is the only issue I have and that's an ingrained prejudice I have with OCs so it's not your fault.
I want something to happen with Toph her personality is almost as bad as Raven's so putting the two together should be interesting
| OMAC001 chapter 6 . 12/19/2013
Interesting concept. I hope to see more.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 6 . 12/1/2013
Thank you so much Aiko Isari. I was waiting this story. It is really great user friendly and smooth.
The ending scene seemed kind of ominous, but also kind of peaceful.
| Princess Unikitty chapter 4 . 11/10/2013
liked the titans in this chapter. keep it up.
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| kotomi101 chapter 4 . 11/8/2013
Burning for the next one.
| kotomi101 chapter 3 . 11/8/2013
Just up the good work.