|Reviews for Paths Crossed|
| ImageFaded chapter 10 . 4h
... I eat mashed potatoes with a fork
| dakotta.defabis chapter 35 . 12/31/2015
| Chris and Michael chapter 35 . 12/7/2015
Chris: ERR MUH GERD! The first two sentences broke ma heart! But then I kept reading and was happy again! :)
Michael: Thoughtful, huh?
Anyway, I am very glad that you changed your mind and I am most definitely looking forward to the next chapter(whenever it may be posted). I will continue to look for alerts letting know that you have updated this story. Til then I will read the other stories you have to offer and (try to) review them. :)
Chris: Ya get what you get and you don't throw a fit.
| Chris and Michael chapter 34 . 12/7/2015
Chris: Da bloops! Where da bloops?! Iz needz da Bloopaahs!
Michael: I do have to agree with him on this one. You haven't been adding in the bloopers as of late. Also, I do apologize for the absence of reviews from us. Sometimes we get TOO into a story and neglect to leave a (on my part)thoughtful review regarding the quality of the chapter. We tend to jump to the next chapter to find out what happens next.
Chris: I can be thoughtful!
| Chris and Michael chapter 10 . 12/6/2015
Chris: Gimme dem BLOOPERS! Ah needz da bloopers!
Michael: You do realize that this story is long past this right? And we'll have to just continue reading to find out if he did write the bloopers? Right?
Chris: Quit throwing a logic wrench in the works!
Michael: It's monkey wrench...
| Chris and Michael chapter 2 . 12/6/2015
Michael: Good job on the chapter and the descriptions and interactions with everyone was really nice. Now, what was GOING to say before I was RUDELY interrupted-
Chris: This again?!
Michael: -WAS that I agree. I will read a story with an OC or two in there but I greatly prefer one without them or one with a really NASTY OC as the villain!
Chris: Do you ever shut up?
Michael: Do you?
| Chris and Michael chapter 1 . 12/6/2015
Chris: It was B! A - n - a - n - a - s, bananas!
Michael: He has a song stuck in his head...
As for the story, I personally didn't find anything wrong with it. No spelling errors, poor sentence structure, or anything of the sort. Of course that's just me. I'm sure someone with far better literary skills than I would find something wrong. But as far as I'm concerned, it's just fine. I would like to say more on the topic of OC's but that would turn this review into a short story. But for now now I'll just say that I-
Chris: Just shut uuuuup already...
| TBR0 chapter 35 . 11/1/2015
I really like this story, I can't wait for the next chapter. I have read the whole thing 3 times so far.
| Otakugirl 13 chapter 35 . 9/19/2015
Hey, I'm glad you're continuing this! I'm not active on this ship or fandom anymore but I was suddenly hit with a craving for anything Finnceline related few days too. I've become a rather picky reader after my break from ffn and I already read the complete popular ones years back so it was really hard to find satisfying ones now. This story caught my attention and I gave it a 2 days marathon reading. Enough of my ramblings, what I want to say is that I really love your story and how you write it. I also like how you develop their relationship. I'm excited how this will go on. Thank you for not giving up on this! :)
| Erika Peterson chapter 35 . 7/13/2015
Whaaaaaat?! You almost made me cry! I mean, it's not that that post on chapter 35 did not deserve any tear, but it's 4:30 A.M (yes, 4:30 A.M.) and I don't think my eyes wanna cry... However, my heart somehow sank. You know what? I'll tell you why I love this fic and why I seriously think that it deserves and ending. First, I love your writing style, it's easy to follow yet carefully built. Second, although we already know the characters, here I find them 3 dimensional, to me they are real people having real-life problems. Third, the flow of events is really natural and doesn't rush things. Fourth, the romantic tension between Marcie and Finn is so unbearable that made me read these 85k words in approximately two days. Fifth, it's been a long time since I reviewed any fic (which is kind of embarrassing) but I couldn't help reviewing yours, it's something I can't explain. Sixth, I've laughed in two days more than I have in the last two months. Seventh, reading this fic has made me want to write a One Piece - Adventure Time crossover fic. Eigth, I'll miss your Author Notes and this fic. Please end this fic, I don't ask for anything else. You may not want to believe it, but you're a good fic writer and I'm delighted to have chosen to read this fic. Thank you for the last 34 amazing chapters (I wouldn't change anything, not even a comma, of them). I hope I'll be able to read you soon! xoxo
| Erika Peterson chapter 27 . 7/13/2015
Hunson is hilarious! I love Finn's reactions hahaha. By the way, the child in the dream I'm sure is Marceline, since she had short hair as a child and she could have been mistaken and given that Finn and she are the same age maybe they met at school and don't remember each other. It's like their being together is DESTINY! (the last word sung as Sam Tsui would sing it hehe)
| Erika Peterson chapter 26 . 7/13/2015
Ooooow that was one of the cutest things ever! Maybe a kiss on her forehead would have embarrassed him and make him blush, but anyways, all the chapter was amazing, really. I can't make scenes like that TTnTT
Hunson has cameras in his house, hasn't he? Is he looking at them while they're sleeping? That'd be awesome!
Don't worry about your cute scenes, they are perfect :)
| Erika Peterson chapter 23 . 7/13/2015
I knew it! I knew it! And you knew I knew it! Muahahaha. That amazing mind of yours... I love it! (L) What actually took me more off guard is that ha was also the principal because to me they were two different people. So the wannabe FBI teacher are like the businessmen in the iceber, right? Hahaha I imagine them like that. It was funny to read Finn's thoughts about Marceline's appearance in her house. I already want the kiss please!
| Erika Peterson chapter 19 . 7/12/2015
Whaaaaaaat? There was supposed to be a kiss?! TTnTT However, I loved they willingly held hands and Flare appeared out of the blue in time to take a photo. Your chapters are awesome, I love them all even if don't review on each one. By the way, I'm the guest who reviewed earlier on the bug chapter, I don't know why I was logged out...
| Guest chapter 17 . 7/12/2015
Woooooo! Marcie likes Finn, Marcie likes Finn na na na na na! Hahahah The bug task was awesome and it was funny to imagine Marceline onto Finn's shoulder fighting bugs with a broom-sword. I already want to read the beach chapter. The thing with their hands was HILARIOUS. And I'va a question where does Marceline strength come from? O.O
If the question is still open I choose B:disappear