Reviews for it's not a lovesong
Historic Soldier chapter 1 . 12/19/2013
I love it! :D :D :D
noukinav018 chapter 1 . 11/17/2013
Nice Lokane one shot. LOL I guess that they do have very violent first meetings XD
Seems like tradition. Luckily they're past that already.
Maybe next time she'll just jump him or the other way around XD
Guest chapter 1 . 11/11/2013
Odin is a Dumbledore. manipulative and condescending. kind of evil.
d1x1lady chapter 1 . 10/29/2013
Awesome story!
Mistysky M.M.M chapter 1 . 10/19/2013
Wow, this is brilliantly written. The small details are a treasure to read about. Loki playing a game with Jane on the Wii is too much cuteness to handle. It's a good thing it was Mortal Combat. Her reaction to Loki's visit must have been very instinctual. It made me laugh. I enjoyed this one shot. You did real good.
jeadamized chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
I like the part(s) when Jane is deducing her thoughts until it reaches finality. She finally gives in to ! Please do some more one-shots of them.
megumisakura chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
beautiful story,please write more.
PureSummerMagic chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Loved it from start to finish! I hope we see more Lokane from you soon. :)
pink-strawberries chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
Awesome Lokane and really believable! Hope you become inspired enough to write a full story in the future ;)
Kat-Knife chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
This was a really great one-shot! I actually wish that you had made it into a full story because I really enjoyed reading your style of writing. Great job! :)
fly2venus4tea chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
These are 3,368 words of (Lokane) perfection.

Thanks for writing! May we have some more please?
Omnicat chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Love it. Jane kicking Loki in the gonads makes me cackle every time. And that he can still use his equipment to great satisfaction afterwards is, of course, an excellent bonus. XD