Reviews for Mornings
sagitgirlth chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Nice try writing without Angst. In my opinion, the story'd get better if you add more plot or make it more fluffy and sweet or more teasing. The story is light and your writing is good but overall the story isn't much impressive. Usually you use angst to make the story getting very serious and use the romance to lighten things up in between before released them all at the ending. I felt good reading with thoes emotion. So when you write this, without angst, the story lack emotion, you should add something to replace that hole. Keep trying.
miss greenpeace chapter 1 . 10/11/2013
this is lots of nice! it's a really light and warm read :)) definitely want more like this one! I like their interaction and how comfortable they are to each other, and how comfortable it seems for you to write them. this is a very nice morning after fic. love this piece.