Reviews for I: Icarus
yukinataangel chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Please continue this! I'm absolutely loving it!
Adalanta chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Wow! What a great story! I love how you've used the flashbacks to tell the story of Chuck and Mako as children. Poor Chuck! I didn't particularly care for him that much in the movie, but I can certainly sympathize with him in this story. Keep up the great work! I'm off to read Part II.
oftypewritersandribbons chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Holy guacamole Batman! Absolutely adored this!

Loved how the flashbacks were entwined with the present using various cues.

I am a little doubtful that Chuck could have survived a blast that big, but meh, artistic licence I guess.

At the line "And she... She was supposed to be with him." I actually gasped. I'm not sure what's that indicative of but I'm going to say it's a good thing. Although I'm not sure I can handle a love triangle - so I'm going to interpret this as Chuck wishing Mako could have piloted with him and the two of them would have been awesome together.

Look forward to the next part!
knightphoenix2 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Great start to a good story, keep it up!