|Reviews for I: Icarus|
| yukinataangel chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Please continue this! I'm absolutely loving it!
| Adalanta chapter 1 . 2/12/2014
Wow! What a great story! I love how you've used the flashbacks to tell the story of Chuck and Mako as children. Poor Chuck! I didn't particularly care for him that much in the movie, but I can certainly sympathize with him in this story. Keep up the great work! I'm off to read Part II.
| oftypewritersandribbons chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Holy guacamole Batman! Absolutely adored this!
Loved how the flashbacks were entwined with the present using various cues.
I am a little doubtful that Chuck could have survived a blast that big, but meh, artistic licence I guess.
At the line "And she... She was supposed to be with him." I actually gasped. I'm not sure what's that indicative of but I'm going to say it's a good thing. Although I'm not sure I can handle a love triangle - so I'm going to interpret this as Chuck wishing Mako could have piloted with him and the two of them would have been awesome together.
Look forward to the next part!
| knightphoenix2 chapter 1 . 10/12/2013
Great start to a good story, keep it up!