|Reviews for A Vampire Named Alice|
| CorvoKingOfCrows chapter 10 . 8/11
Damn. That's all I can think to say. You did an amazing job writing this. Had me on the edge of my seat at the end. Bravo!
| kamonwan9952 chapter 10 . 5/31
I'm crying in happiness! holyshit i love you author, one hella amazing story! God I can't. Wow
P.s that balcony(?) totes is magical or smth
| kamonwan9952 chapter 8 . 5/31
OMYGOD MY HEART IS BREAKINH IT HURTS SO GOOD! holyfucks...
| kamonwan9952 chapter 3 . 5/31
ohgod this chapter. I literally started cryin while reading this and I'm in the bus right now and lmfao some guy saw me. shit me likey da angst
| FireInLife chapter 10 . 10/20/2015
I can't believe an author who wrote a disgusting, vile story like "All Red" could also write something oh so sweet as this...
I managed to get to chapter 65 in All Red (although maybe 15% of that was skipped) simply from morbid curiosity and the desire to see the Cullen's reaction. And afterwards, I was filled with self-loathing and guilt; I felt like I was spitting on the man and women in my life who have been raped, and I deeply regretted ignoring your initial warnings. I had a hard time sleeping that night, and simply felt awful in general.
But this story managed to do the reverse. While the beginning was almost dub-con, the rest was an absolutely lovely love story. And the ending...you could have ended with a perfect tragedy by killing Alice and having Bella truly dying from her fall, however you made it a wonderfully sweet (albeit short and semi-rushed) ending. I guess even those who can enjoy twisted fantasies can also come up with warmth inspiring stories.
But really, this is a wonderful story you have written, and I truly thank you for it.
| Noble Korhedron chapter 10 . 9/21/2015
The last scene was just a bit creepy, but that was mainly from all the blood. So I take it Alice turned her then?
| thecuriouspanda chapter 10 . 8/6/2015
This is one of THE best stories I have EVER read! It was beautiful. I loved it! Thank you so much for letting us experience this and it made my day. Thanks.
| NicoleBuddy chapter 10 . 7/24/2015
This is one of the best stories I've ever read on this site. I can't call it one of the best fanfics because it doesn't use any of Twilight's world-building and rules, but it'd be an amazing (and in my opinion publish-worthy) original short story if the names and Bella's hometown were changed.
| BetterinTexas chapter 10 . 6/27/2015
Geat story. You are an amazing writer.
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/28/2015
Absolutely beautiful; except the ending, a happy ending doesn't fit a tragedy.
| Guest chapter 10 . 5/25/2015
I totally agree with the other reviews, this was amazing...
| Danglingfeet chapter 10 . 5/17/2015
I cried so much reading this story. I really thought it was going to end with Bella's death, I'm so glad it didn't.
You write beautifully.
| RachellovesRain chapter 2 . 4/27/2015
God...ur writting style is amazing. Im totally intrigued.
| shabbacabba chapter 10 . 4/17/2015
You need to do this for a living if you don't already. I do not cry easily, and this story tore my heart apart, sewed it back together, and tore it apart again time and time again. It was beautiful, poetic, moving and and ...
My life is better having read it. Thank you, sincerely.
| Erratus Enigma chapter 1 . 3/31/2015
This was fantastic, and hopefully not as bad for me as Alice was to Bella pre-fang operation.
...okay, I somehow got distracted and left this sitting here for about 3 hours.
This is surprisingly difficult to write for some reason.
Your grammar was good! It was not *perfect*, but very, very close. I can only remember a few typos and misspellings, in fact! The sentences flow quite well, too.
Now, I know this is an AU, but the characters felt...surprisingly canon. For some reason. Looking back, they don't actually seem all that...'in-character' as they were when I was reading, but it definitely felt that way throughout the whole read.
I was both confused and overjoyed at your depiction of the littlest Vampire. Was a very refreshing take, since she didn't appear to have any outlandish powers, or invincibility, or anything of the sort. I mean, yes, she did attempt to do a skit as an Australian Spider, but we all can forgive her for that, right?
And their acting together! That was *so* bitter-sweet, I loved that. How Alice, from the start, wanted nothing more than to enjoy all the little moments she'd have with Bella -usually by many, many hours of sex- but as time went by, it was Bella who wanted to do that instead, while Alice tried her best to preserve her by-then mortal lover.
And the end...wow. I knew what was going to happen the moment Alice told Bella her mother's story, but it was no less powerful when it actually happened. I shed some tears at that.
This was, I must reiterate, a very emotional read. And while it wasn't particularly long - it took me about 3 hours to finish the story at around 0545 AM - it was very, very worth it. It would still be worth it if it was a ten hour read, or a hundred hours. This story was fantastic.
It's already on my list of favourites, and it's there to stay. Keep up the amazing work, Mistermiss Writer!