Jesus I thought one of the main characters was gonna die. Since you just introduced her I feel the death wasn't as sad but still I feel it's going to impact all the pilots

HOLY SHINJI FUCKIN CASANOVA. He's smoother than butter

Wtf rei with kensuke? That's weird but I'll roll with it. Asuka totally has the hots for my man

I'm gonna enjoy this. Finally Shinji isn't a fuckin pussy

I imagined shinji doing a JonTron impression when he said Ack!

...that line about asuka expecting, was that a reference to the redo fanwork?

Excellent story. I enjoyed all of the characterizations. While they might be a little OOC for what we are used to, it works really well in your world where Shinji gets a redo.
Your writing was fantastic. The entire story made me understand the Evangelion world so much more than the actual TV show and movies.
I look forward to reading the sequel. Again, nice job!

"Lust only pertains to those that take more than one woman, and has no emotional ties to any of them."

Matthew 5:28
"But I tell you that anyone who looks at a woman lustfully has already committed adultery with her in his heart."

Just finished reading thru the whole thing. I really like reading Eva stories that involve a redo of some sort, usually involving Shinji, and I can say that this one is one of the best so far.
I like the way you pull together the many different Eva storylines. Working the redo as mostly the Rebuild movies while keeping some of the best parts of the TV series and including bits of the manga and dramas as well. Simply amazing. I can't wait to start on the sequel to see what happens during the time skip, especially since we have almost no idea based on the movies. Keep up the good work, this fan wants more.

Asuka is not acting as bitchy as I normally expect her to be in the story because she gives the Main character a great deal of grief.

I want to know who is this Abraham character I have never heard of this character in Evangelion is this a added OC in the story.

This Shinji must come from another world he is totally different than the one that I am used in seeing.

You made startling changes to Shinji because he is a pushover in the whole story because he never had the guts to make comments like that about his father because most of the women in the story push him around.

The pairing of Asuka is interesting because it is the one that can't be realized because she bullies him a great deal in the story.

This story is so surprising because in the canon Asuka is a bitch to Shinji, and he is a bonafide wimp throughout the series the one person that was closest to establish a relationship was actually Misato.

Good story.

It was good seeing Shinji take lead of a squad of pilots. I hope you allow some spotlight on the other pilots to shine.