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![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this collection of stories so much! You are absolutely talented with your words. Every paragraph is a joy to read. This has got to be the slowest burn fic I have ever read, honestly, but it was worth it. I loved reading every chapter. You did Kakashi and Sakura perfectly. Thank you for writing these and sharing it to the world! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I am loving this collection of stories so far; you are an excellent author! But I have to say that this chapter, CHAPTER 6, is one close to my heart and is a story I’ve been looking for for a long time now! What I mean is: a KakaSaku POV during the war. Kakashi is one of my favorite characters in all of Naruto. He’s just amazing in every way. My favorite Kakashi is 4th Ninja War-Kakashi. From the moment he was introduced to thousands of ninja as 3rd division captain/commander (as seen on this chapter!), I fell in love with him even more. It’s no secret that he is one of the best ninjas across the 5 nations, and for him to be trusted enough to lead an entire division, and to do so very efficiently (I mean, he practically saved everyone who needed help. He was suddenly everywhere), is just so… sexy! He’s a walking sex god genius! Ugh. I was glad when Sakura was placed in his division, but sad that they didn’t really interact during this time, especially after she was transferred to the Medical Corps. In my headcanon I imagined them worrying about each other during the war and all that. Reading this chapter was kind of a serendipity, because I’ve been wanting to read a story exactly like this. I’m rambling! I can’t properly put into words what I wanna say lol! But I totally loved the way you wrote them. Thank you! I’ll continue with the next chapters. I just had to pause and leave a review for chapter 6 because I love it so much. Also, jealous Saku and honorable Kakashi are so cute! I say honorable because Kakashi denied that he would do something like *that* with Ran especially at a time like this. Lol! And I’m so glad nothing happened. But poor Sakura torturing herself over it (and not realizing it) |
![]() ![]() ![]() God, this chapter turns me to be a madman. Especially when Kakashi finally confessed his feelings to Sakura when they were reminiscing about the times during the war… my goodness. Even though I've read those three words from other KakaSaku fanfics I've read many times, I still can't hold back my screams every time I read it. Asjkfkl! And how Sakura actually mocked Kakashi after that made the situation between them even more perfect! Haha! Not to mention because then Kakashi mocked Sakura back when Sakura revealed that she loved Kakashi no matter what he looked like. And how they both ended up falling into the lake… They are both really awesome, x'D Once again, I really love how you structure this story… I can't stop admiring it. And I think this is one of my favorite post-war KakaSaku fanfics! Thanks for writing this! Thank you for your hard work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww… I love how Kakashi reacted after learning that Sakura had ended her relationship with Ken. And I'm relieved that Sakura isn't thinking about taking the relationship to a more serious level because I have to admit that… Ken looks like a nice guy, not to mention his perfect background, because Kakashi even admits that it makes him seem self-conscious, haha. And I'm also satisfied with this changing situation! I liked how Sakura looked calm facing Kakashi in their conversation about what had happened. It's quite funny to see Kakashi trying to explain why. I tried to understand that it had become a part of him, feeling inadequate because of the past that haunted him. But hey, did I read it wrong…? He hoped that Sakura would yank him down and kiss him? Aw, Hatake… you really fell badly. I also liked the part where Kakashi mused about his parents! Especially about Sakumo. Aaah, I really like their father-son relationship! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I don't know whether to be happy or sad or suspicious? I mean, it's good that Sakura has managed to move on from the feelings she has for Kakashi… although a part of me suspects that she has a relationship with Ken as a diversion. And of course, I enjoyed the jealousy that Kakashi had, lol. I guess it was karma for him for trying to lie to his own feelings. Oh! I can't stop myself from laughing as he talks to himself while looking at himself in the mirror, haha. It was so ridiculous, and I'm glad that Sakura witnessed that! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A chapter full of POV Kakashi, wow! I've always found it very satisfying to read what comes from his eyesight, or what's in his mind! And one thing that caught my attention the most from this chapter was the fact that Sakura was also appointed as a candidate to become Hokage! Asjkfkl. I always thought that Sakura was very suitable to lead the village. However, indeed… she was too young to carry all that burden, especially since Sakura already had something else she was obsessed with. However, now I believe that the reason Kakashi became Hokage was to save Sakura from all that burden. What a lovely man he is~. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww… I've always liked Kakashi as a more worried parent than Sakura, haha. However, Sakura's role was to calm Kakashi down. Which makes them complementary. But being showed the KakaSaku chapter in married life after reading the previous chapter… was a pleasant surprise. Haha. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AAASJKFKL. It's annoying because my feelings for this fanfic are growing bigger and bigger! Especially because this chapter is like a roller coaster ride, which goes up and down, then twists and turns; created all kinds of emotions from me. There's a funny part; make me laugh, some make me feel frustrated, happy like being in love, sad, disappointed… and many more. It's undeniable that I admire Kakashi's tenacity enough to not let himself fall for Sakura, even though there are moments where he can't control himself like, when he masturbates and accidentally imagines Sakura in his fantasy, haha, that part makes me feel feverish. And I admit, I've always found that part sexy, too. Sakura's dream that put her in the world of the smut book she read? Haha, oh my… I wonder how she'll react if she ends up reading what she hasn't had the chance to touch, fufu. And the conversation she had with Sasuke… I felt a little irritated, more towards Sasuke, actually. Why did he feel that he needed Sakura as an excuse to return to Konoha? Tsk. I never liked him. Although I'm a little curious, does he have any other guess about the guy Sakura likes besides Naruto? Is it possible that he realized that the one living in Sakura's heart was Kakashi now? Actually, I also find Kakashi realizing that Sakura likes him is interesting, especially since he thinks this is just a phase. A phase that will never end, I say. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Even though I'm infatuated about KakaSaku, it doesn't make me completely like what's going on in canon; where only Kakashi accompanied Sakura to see Sasuke leaving in front of the Konoha village gate. I mean, Sakura still seemed childish towards her feelings for Sasuke back then, after what he had done to her. And what you wrote here, I think, makes a lot more sense (to me). Where Naruto was more sentimental towards Sasuke's departure, while Sakura felt that she wasn't that close to him. And I like what Kakashi thinks of Sakura here. When judging from what happened in canon, it was Kakashi who appreciated her the most. I guess that's what makes me feel he is the perfect match for Sakura, even though the first time I fell in love with this couple, it was because of a fanfic. And the part where Sakura told herself that she had a crush on Kakashi, I couldn't help but smile. What Ino said was not completely wrong for a 12-year-old girl at that time, haha! I've also confessed my feelings to someone just to convince myself that I like him. And yes, I do like him. Even though, we weren't dating in the end. :') Oops, why am I even venting? Haha. And… I really like how you wrote this fanfic! The timeline isn't sequential, but that's what makes it so interesting! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, first long chapter and I really admire how you wrote this! It is undeniable that the fourth shinobi war is a very likely time for Kakashi and Sakura to have more feelings for each other. However, of course, the two of them didn't realize that because there were so many things they needed to think about at that time. I can also feel the feel of war very clearly from this chapter! How much Kakashi thinks about Sakura… oh my God, this feels so perfect to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Asjkfkl. I'm guessing that the gift that Sakura whispered was about pregnancy, I mean... Misaki? Even Hatake Kakashi, who usually doesn't show affection in public, couldn't help himself. Even though my guess can be wrong. Then, another thing I realized that made me stop myself from screaming was... they celebrated Kakashi's birthday with a cake... and I thought that was really cute. Asjkfkl. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn. I had no idea that you provided the same story through Kakashi's POV. And... oh, look, how different things are here compared to Sakura. Sakura's felt so pure, while him...? He who tried to deny his feelings even dreamed of such perverted things! Ugh. I'm really mad with Kakashi... But let's see, will he still feel victorious like this, or will he be the one to kneel before Sakura to give her love to him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow... I loved the build of this chapter, and somehow I feel like I want to assume that this actually happened between them in canon, haha. When considering how Kakashi's personality is, like it or not, Sakura must come forward first if she wanted there to be any development in their relationship. And rejection, is very likely to happen. It wasn't that Kakashi didn't want Sakura, but that he really cared about her. I felt my heartbreaking when I read the part where Sakura confessed her feelings and didn't hear what she wanted to hear from Kakashi. I can totally understand how she feels. I refrained from crying at that part. Although I never really liked sad KakaSaku, I think this is my favorite chapter for now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... Never did I expect to see KakaSaku from Minato's point of view and... I find it very cute. I can understand Minato's concern about the feelings his son has for Sakura. However, when he thought of Kakashi as his surrogate son and thought that Kakashi deserved to be happy, my heart fluttered. Besides being sweet, it's also interesting. Will one day, when Kakashi realizes that he is in love with Sakura, he remembered what Minato said to him? |