Reviews for An Ordinary Day?
Avengers13 chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
Lol! I love it! :-)
Barb chapter 1 . 3/20/2014
Loved it! That's a great story! Loved the character work you did. Great job.
bookaholic2000 chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
It was cute. What I liked the most was the 'scary' story.

Having said that, I would like to point out the drawback: this story was written in Frank's voice but it sounded a bit... 'mature', in a way. What I mean to say is that this story failed to bring out the voice of a child sharing this memory; it would have been better if it had been written in third person. Just an opinion!

But it indeed was a Good Effort!
erinjordan chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
I thought your story was really good.
lys chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
haha, super cute! :) wow! Please write more hb stories, i'd love to read 'em :)
bhar chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Great story. Nice to read a HB story without a mystery. You kept it interesting and light hearted at the sane time. Nice job.
Foxy121 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
Awwwwwww I love things like this. :)
max2013 chapter 1 . 10/13/2013
This was awesome-very cute! thank you.