|Reviews for The Psyche's View|
| sarah chapter 9 . 7/1/2005
wow I had no idea there were any feardotcom stories here... not bad, not bad at all. congrats on being the first to write one of these, you should write another one. (just an idea, i've always wondered what ppl think would've happened if mike had lived...)
being super super picky, there were just a few errors in here (i put what's in the story first and what's said in the movie below that):
"Periapt was only half right."
Bryant was only half right.
"More like a slow job."
more like a slow trot.
"None of it matters, but someone performed an autopsy on this body a long time ago,"
I do believe she said, "I don't know if it matters, but..."
"(Not a very nice person, Mr. Sykes.) All the needing habits."
Appaling eating habits.
Might be more, but I'm not sure. Just in case you cared about being extremely accurate (and so I was giving a little bit of constructive critisism and not a idle review) Great job!
| Magdalena Iris Roth chapter 9 . 11/25/2002
I cried, yes, I cried! It was so sad yet sweet, when he died I so was ready to cry, then when he called her and she got his message, I literally cried! I loved this so much!
| Maggie chapter 1 . 9/22/2002
So far so good, keep going! I loved this movie so much! Im glad you wrote a story about it.