Reviews for Dueling Hearts
bluemarvel0 chapter 7 . 3/31
Great Joey and Mai story.
Akimoto Ren chapter 7 . 8/31/2008
Oh man! I so can't make a comment worthy of your work, but since you request them I'll try. It's not commen of me to read a story of romance, but your cute discribing style kept me going on and on. The passion in each of your carefully formed sentences as you write about the deepest emotions in such a professional manner. Ever tryed writting with your own material? A story of your own characters? I do see you as the most talented user of this site.
justdroppingby chapter 1 . 10/7/2007
*walks up to stage and taps microphone*

*ahem*

AWSOME!

*applause*
darkrunner chapter 7 . 1/9/2007
Wow, I thought I was a hardcore polarshipper, but you wrote fanfics back during DUELIST KINGDOM! I didn't even ship then!

That was awesome! I loved it! Believe me, I have read a lot of Jou x Mai fics in my day, and that was one of the best. I didn't think it could get any better, but no, there's an epilogue! And it becomes even more perfect! I usually try to comment on some writing things so you can improve as a writer, but honestly, I don't know what there is to comment on. You misspelled kuriboh at first, and got Flame Swordsman's stats wrong, but that's really all I can think of. The whole Laoa character was slightly far-fetched, but you did write this in the first season, and for all we knew then, that could have been a real character. You did know well enough not to make it a millennium item, though.

Oh, there was one mistake. Duelist Kingdom only lasted three days, including the finals. You had it way longer. But again, that's something small that you don't have to worry about.

I thought I was going to die laughing when Joey said "Don't kill me, don't kill me!" XD OMG, that was the funniest thing I've seen in ages! I mean, it wasn't THAT funny, (I mean that in a nice way) but it was just the way I pictured him saying it... XD

The ending was awesome! I loved it! And best of all, THEY FELL ASLEEP IN DIFFERENT BEDS! THANK YOU! -_- THANK YOU!

AWESOME FIC! I'm putting this in my favorite stories, then dashing off to read the sequel!
Joey's Baby Girl chapter 7 . 6/21/2005
OMG! That was so sweet! I LOVE JOEY AND MAI! There are so many lame stories about them out there but this story is so perfect! Please countinue!
Yeah this is deleted chapter 7 . 6/20/2005
This is awesome! _
Arami Heartilly chapter 7 . 2/9/2005
this story is fantastic, i love it. brilliant work, a few minor type errors - but we all have those. great work!
xFilipina-Angelx chapter 7 . 9/5/2004
i love it, its so sweet!
ChelseaLightheart1000 chapter 7 . 9/4/2004
I LOVED it! I knew they liked each other if had watch yesterday's show you could tell that Joey was trying to tell her, but he didn't get a chance. Oh well. Now I'm going to read the next one cya!

-Hermione-Jane-Granger100
Kitsune-Onna19 chapter 7 . 6/17/2004
heehee… mroe sweetness! i love this fic so much! {i have to say that because i cant think of anything while im speechless}
Kitsune-Onna19 chapter 6 . 6/17/2004
i love this! love it love it love it love it love it love it ! it's so sweet! and, before i forget about my own J&M fic, can you pls. R&R it?
Kitsune-Onna19 chapter 5 . 6/17/2004
short and sweet always! but a lil' sad at the end though.
Kitsune-Onna19 chapter 4 . 6/17/2004
YAY! joey won! lol… you are a very creative person. i like the cards. . but another thing, yami and yugi, both their eyes are violet, note: may look crimson, but if you pay attention to detail like i do, they're violet.
Kitsune-Onna19 chapter 3 . 6/17/2004
i do love this chapter. it's sweet… i love it when J&M have those "little moments". but theres this thing with anime and bad pasts, joey just happens to have one of those.
Kitsune-Onna19 chapter 2 . 6/17/2004
white t-shirts are not meant to be submerged in water… lol, i didnt know joey and yugi had it in them… male bonding… *INSERT MEGUMI/MAI LAUGH*
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