|Reviews for 2 Parents Minus 1 Child Equals A Journey|
| Tamara chapter 12 . 7/16
Great story please update soon
| jim89 chapter 12 . 5/3
That watching a standoff between two armored divisions realizing that neither side to the last attack can continue
I believe I mentioned this a few chapters ago, but having. Valerie could be one of you will change the tide here
it looks like I was right her equipment still being online could give the advantage over the jerks in white
I'm not sure I feel that Danny and Sam taken out easily and was completely unnecessary. Neither Sam nor Danny went in guns blazing. Of course, this kind of stupid. Easily gone a lot worse. What if others will with Danny and Sam instead
of being defensive they decided to go on offensive the Café into oblivion. I can easily see when their attacker sending a serious case of the injured or dead at this point Danny and Sam's frustration, and get the point where they don't care about pulling their punches any longer
I respect Matthew and his wife's objective here to help Danielle and stop the guys in white but but agonizing Danielle's parents who been desperately searching for her in this completely stupid way of going about it. Given how Danny was feeling being jerking around right now. He might even going nuclear very soon.
Matthew here. Should've just considered and his wife parent to parent. Just talking to Danny and Sam directly that would've been the logical and safer way of going about it.
Of course, given that this is a whole community of human, ghost hybrids out there and they can't figure out how to approach the Phantom family. Our little Orleans group might've got the most asinine way of going about it
At this point their credibility is pretty much in the toilet given that they attacked first and then try to keep them prisoner. Why would Danny and Sam believe them?
I would be surprised in future if some of the other members of their search party for Danielle. Like Valerie shows up and punches the New Orleans people in the face a few times before they explain themselves and frankly they deserve it
I know this is a long shot but it seems to be all the people back in town that created this mass passenger drop-off the face of the Earth. The gang that Danielle was associated with the bully at school, start this mass, her former best friend Lin. I'm not sure how they fit in. Story wise but I here no idea how they fit into this. Currently be nice to see the doing something. Maybe the help or hinder this mess
We shall see
| jim89 chapter 11 . 5/3
Josh would've a jerk here. I mean all these not everyone knows everything. Just because someone doesn't quote a a reference books off the top of their head doesn't mean they're dumb
Of course, maybe he just has a way of pushing people's buttons
Josh is not about wasting time is called explaining your actions before you do them. One of the people following you like Danielle Alex to carry out complex task. If you want to do it right and quickly. You have to explain it to them first
Okay I take it back. Josh is annoying he the walking equivalent of Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde. And that of the person they have to work with ash just twisted. Course what I've seen I don't think they're actually two separate personalities I think the same one but Josh. Really compartmentalized in his actions
Wow so their escape route is through something extremely dangerous. Yeah.
Next time maybe heart volcano with lava or a nuclear reactor.
Course given Josh attitude so far it doesn't fill me with confidence. The claim. He has full control over the darkness in this dangerous area
Sounds like they're playing with fire in a way
Of course I we notice the vintage horror movie cliché coming on one of them says I think were being followed in this dangerous place. The other ones conveniently ignore it. Usually that means something, will pop up later from this
We shall see
| Tamara chapter 12 . 4/24
I hope you update soon
| Tamara chapter 12 . 3/28
Great please update soon
| Everyone's-Little-Nightmare chapter 12 . 3/20
this just keeps getting better and better, keep writing
| Guest chapter 12 . 2/27
THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR THE UPDATE! I can't wait to see what happens next
| ValkyrieDefender chapter 12 . 2/19
I enjoyed it! Can't wait to see what happens next!
| The Storymaster1000 chapter 12 . 2/19
Hey glad to see you updating this again; can't wait to see what happens next I'm interested in seeing what you have planned for when they reunite for reals, keep them coming but no rush take your time.
| Reading Pixie chapter 12 . 2/18
| Wolvmbm chapter 12 . 2/18
Great update and nice flashback to the first of the EXTRAS stories. It seems that Dani has a connection to her parents and vice versa whenever either of them are in danger.
Nice update overall and please do keep up the good work on this great sequel.
| ValkyrieDefender chapter 11 . 2/12
I also like this series. I just hope that Dani and her family are reunited soon!
| Hakken-Senshi chapter 1 . 2/7
Just started reading this, and I don't understand one thing about the Spectral Scream. How could it cause one's ears to bleed when it causes no destruction to the surrounding area? A Ghostly Wail causes a ton of destruction (That is, when used at its full power as seen in TUE) , and has never caused anyone's ears to bleed. I don't understand.
| Sally.yang chapter 11 . 12/22/2015
Please update this story it's really great!
| Mystic Tame chapter 11 . 10/19/2015
NOT A FLAME
But you might want to work on pacing. More info revealed by a pace and hint at future things within the two groups. Just some advice.
Like if someone called Josh the other name before when we first met them. Or Dani wanting to know more while she was their or hold out on a secret little more