Reviews for Perceptum
FlackAttack chapter 2 . 11/6
I really wish you had continued this story. I'm watching the Battle of Britain right now and would love to read your take on how the Turians would react to all the changes in tides during the war. Also how they react to the war speeches of the leaders of WW2.
Qi chapter 1 . 4/15
I can't believe you never went further than two chapters with this story. The potential of seeing the citadel races react to the twists and turns of events in WWII is very intriguing. Actually, it's a shame you've never completed any of your stories. They're clearly we written, but all too short and unfinished. Here, if you don't stray too far from historical events, half the plot is written for you and still it's left abandoned.
butters101 chapter 2 . 1/22
Is this story being continued? This has alot of promise.
Carlthompson chapter 2 . 9/4/2016
will they be more to this story
Alkeni chapter 2 . 5/10/2016
Very interesting start.
The Rookie Author chapter 2 . 4/28/2016
Plz continue XD
Winthrow chapter 2 . 1/31/2016
I would like to see their reactions to the atomic bombings of hiroshima and nagisaki as well as ww2
mattemo153 chapter 2 . 10/13/2015
very good this is unique and i would like to see how it peogresses
KhazintheDark chapter 2 . 6/16/2014
I've just realized this but won't the Asari witness Hiroshima and Nagasaki? Which could cause them to write the humans off as a compatible race. Interesting, also, I know that you haven't updated since December but as you haven't said that you've abandoned this I'm following and hoping for more.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/20/2014
For the digust abiut use of nuclear weapons, I'm sure that contrary to the politicians and mundane people, some scientists will understand that a specie as a whole cannot understand their danger and horror before using some of them. Some individuals can, but not the majority, they have to see to understand. And for the Concil races to ban them means that they used them in the past. And probably destroyed one ecosystem or two.
Commissar Critical chapter 1 . 5/4/2014
Really? WW2? That's kinda lame. Oh well. God bless America, and Germany.
EffervescentNova chapter 2 . 5/3/2014
Pretty great idea for a story and also very well written. There's a very real life feel to what you've written. I could almost taste the air on the Pyjak homeworld.

Are you continuing? I'll be following regardless.
EffervescentNova chapter 1 . 5/3/2014
Not a very believable british couple for the time.

Interesting idea having th Asari observe humanitiy's development across the 20th century. The Asari are so slow as well that they could easily expect to wait centuries before having to make contact.
carl9390 chapter 2 . 4/11/2014
Good stuff more please
pojo18 chapter 1 . 3/11/2014
Please continue 'clash of civilisation'
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