Reviews for Into the fire
Guest chapter 10 . 4/7
please please please continue this is great!
Guest chapter 10 . 4/7
do you enjoy writing depressing stories? ha dw its really good, well written and full of action
jim89 chapter 10 . 11/14/2014
The line between good guys and bad guys almost nonexistent. Here

The so called heroes here. I.e., global justice ability out openly murder Kim, Ron, and shego

The so-called holding Kim's family hostage. The global justice from their name here
be the first in terrorists and criminal vigilantes. It makes the rogue gallery that Kim deals with looked like damn Saints in comparison.

When this all comes to light later the public side with. Opinion wants and fried Kim and her team when they've done nothing well, the so-called law and order types are so corrupt evil criminal here given a pass. They showed that people are truly idiots in this

As for the global justice agents are not agents but dogs, rabid dogs. If you will
immediately in the matter targeted they take them out. We don't care about casualties. They don't care about collateral damage. They don't care because the situation. There being used. We just go after their target and will keep going until they killed there target. The only way to stop them which Kim was right is to break them. I.e. shattered their spine so they can never walk again

With a question global justice doesn't have an endless amount of agents?
Half of them sided with Dr. Director and quit or refuse, go after Kim.

The way Kim and companies going from them should they be running low on agents soon enough?
I mean Hench go has a lower turnout ratio and skill set they can mass-produce a global justice has rigorous training, which takes years. Hence lower numbers

While they just killed Kim's dad after kidnapping him as innocent civilian. The minimum rules of engagement here in then the possibility of Kim having restraints
now all bets are off. Kim, Ron, shego and Wade going to go after global justice and the backers with no holds barred, given this whole mess we those created by powerful politician ass holes personal vendetta. Chaos in hell will soon follow

We shall see
ajw1970 chapter 10 . 4/18/2014
great chapter cant wait to see what kim does now I know betty is trying to find who gave the kill order but she may not get the chance if she goes all god on them and what of her older half brother would help her to not just kill but to take a revenge worse than death
CajunBear73 chapter 10 . 4/18/2014
Pretty brutal 'rescue', but I'm sure this was according to whomever is pulling strings to 'elevate' Kim to what was desired for her...

Very emotional run through GJ, but now I think a tipping point for Kim has been reached. Though her feelings for James had been so harsh before this, I think what's left of the love she has for him will push her over.

And Hell will follow her. Bet this person also figured Zorpox was controllable too...

jim89 chapter 9 . 1/23/2014
I expect an epic turn around soon. When the troops. All this comes out, there might not be a global justice anymore. Think about it. This caused a civil war in the organization. Even if team possible is fully clear
to be some agents that will never accept it and to a degree the public will follow suit.

Already a lot of the public is turned on Kim and team possible. So when does all said and done the win the battle. But there will lose the war. It's all going to be a hollow victory in the end.
Librana chapter 9 . 1/23/2014
Never a dull moment in this one! The pace is unremitting, though I must admit to getting a bit confused as to the roles of all the protagonists now. But this is a real page-turner.

Small quibble - if GJ were truly trying to set a trap for Kim, I'd expect her parents to be no-one near the site she was directed too, indeed that they were even still alive. But I guess this would negate part of the point of this plot line!

Do check out my own current story if you get a chance!
CajunBear73 chapter 9 . 1/23/2014
Surprises all the way through this chapter, eh?

Still some allies they didn't figure on, but what's at the other end?

Deliverer chapter 8 . 1/18/2014
Loved the Jack Hench part in the beginning. That's probably because I love Jack Hench as a character. Things are heating up with Kim's family in danger and Dr. Director currently not in power. I liked seeing Kim and Ron bonding over their peril. It may not have been Kim/Ron, but it was close enough. I'm increasingly more interested in seeing what Jack has planned out in the long run.
jim89 chapter 8 . 1/13/2014
of the bad guys here really holding all the cards, but also the downfall here being incredibly blatant at this point, not even bothering to cover their tracks. If any of this gets out they are finished.

On the other if team possible actually win this, Hench has decisively cripple global justice and team possible
even if they're clear them on the national news. No one will ever trust him again

the bad guys will get a win win outcome no matter what
CajunBear73 chapter 8 . 1/12/2014
Hope their minds are clear before entering this trap.

I feel it's to the death, no matter which side dies. But the numbers are on the side of 'GJ' right now.

Unless someone can tip the odds in Team Possible's favor.

Still lurking in the shadows, are more than one entity. Some good, some evil.

Luiz4200 chapter 8 . 1/12/2014
"Kim berated himself"? Don't you mean "herself"?
Deliverer chapter 7 . 12/29/2013
This is starting to pick up. Who was the man Dr. Director was speaking to? Who was in the Possible house watching in silence? Regardless, I'm interested to see where this will go. I'm glad to see Kim seems to be coming to terms with Shego and Ron's relationship. Well, at least for now. There aren't many grammatical mistakes, but in the last eight lines two in particular stood out, like "The man shrugged and tickled James to the ground." and "Jim and Tim were similarly restrained, although they were a mite gentler with him". Unless, of course, you meant to say 'tickled' and I'm misunderstanding what the meaning of that word is meant to mean in this context.
CajunBear73 chapter 7 . 12/28/2013
Rough goings with Kim and Ron. Hope they can reconcile before this crapstorm hits them.

Too many possibilities of spies in the midst at GJ, now it comes to Section 13 playing their hand. But are they holding all the cards?

Sorry about your predicament, hope things bear out for you and yours.
Librana chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
It's becoming clearer that Kim has been permanently affected by her encounter with Ambrose in A Possible Legacy. She needs her best friend more than ever, but will he be there for her? I do hope so. Great story!
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