|Reviews for The Last Prince II: The Pact and A Prophecy|
| noxas13 chapter 27 . 4/16
I repeat... AWESOME! Are you intending to post the remainder? It's just I'd rather not read any further without knowing there'll be a conclusion B)
| noxas13 chapter 10 . 4/15
This series is AWESOME!
| Lady Rebell-K Malfoy chapter 29 . 11/9/2017
Nice story! I really wonder where are the other chapters promised!? I know you took a break but it's so great! The elements that I prefer in your univers are all the things related to the background of the characters. It's really a great feat to construct all those past stories and traditions from the past and as I am a fanatic of ancient history, well I really love that. Sure, I'm not a big fan of a super megalomaniac who can overrule everything with a clack of his finger, but, we still don't know all the means he employs... but he mustt have a really big organisation to plot all those things and the great intrigue is what is he waiting for? Like why does he want to destroy Harry Potter of all things? I suppose that this Grandmaster is in prison since a long time so why did he stage all this and for what purpose? What will it bring him? I do not know if Grindewald is dead or imprisonned in your story, so my guess would be him for the Grandmaster if he is alive. I would make sense with what Albus said. And, even if there is still too much good compared to the bad that happens to the characters (sometimes it's a little too predictable) it's a great plot. I really like your way with words too, lyrics poésie is so romantic and melodic to our eyes and ears. I like this setting of archaic hiérarchie of Lords and the rituals accompanying their ways of life, I think sometimes that traditions that are based on long terme believes and rituals give so much meaning to things. And yeah, I would downplay a little bit all the feats that Harry can do with his magical power, well not so much that Harry just gets everything he can get to become the super masterful dude who everyone wants to get their paws on! I don't know if you read the story of The Pureblood Pretense of Murky Blue Matter but it's so good and the plot is just a Master Piece. It will have seven books I guess and the author already have the whole thing in her head and each chapter have reliances on past and future things that will happens and just wow! I think you would like that story. Anyway, thanks for sharing this story and hope to read more!
| Evallienyka.Rogue chapter 29 . 8/22/2017
I want more... I NEED more Please!
| rocelmamaril357 chapter 29 . 6/25/2017
is ginny the grandmaster? i hope there's a sequel...
| irishmama102512 chapter 29 . 5/7/2017
oh my, can't wait for the next part
| DheeDixon chapter 29 . 5/4/2017
please continue this story. this is really an amazing story and I would be very gratefull if you could continue to update it. thank you
| Comatosechaos chapter 29 . 5/2/2017
I have fallen for this book. It's so well written. I can't wait for the next. I hope you continue this because i am shook.
| shera98 chapter 29 . 3/22/2017
Oh my god oh my God! I desperately wish for nothing more in life, but for you to finish this story and your next one in this serious. That ending! I can only assume Ginny is found out, everyone is captured, Severus is saved and reunited with Harry. However they still have to find and finish off the Grandmaster in the next book! Please come back to this wonderful story someday and finish it. I'll be waiting. :)
| Lessil chapter 29 . 3/16/2017
Is it too much to hope for another chapter soon. Please. Pretty pretty please.
| TheAmazingCory chapter 1 . 3/11/2017
Wattpad is the place to go, you would do great things there.
| Crapounette chapter 29 . 9/11/2016
Will you finish this story? I want to read more, because this is a major cliffie! Please!
I like this story, don't abandon us...
| K chapter 29 . 6/29/2016
OMG OMG more please
| Guest chapter 29 . 5/31/2016
Please please finish/continue - one of my favorite fanfiction pieces - EVER!
| Livi chapter 29 . 3/22/2016
Please, Please, finish your story as soon as you can! It's amazing!