Reviews for Candykit's New Moon
Blackheart7272 chapter 8 . 3/15/2022
THAT WAS THE BEST [ $ !] SINCE [[Hyperlink Blocked]]
Blackheart7272 chapter 7 . 3/15/2022
IT'S A LITTLE [Short On Cash?]
Blackheart7272 chapter 6 . 3/15/2022
WHAT A [[Surprise Deal]]
Blackheart7272 chapter 5 . 3/15/2022
HOLY [[Cungadero]] THIS IS GREAT
Blackheart7272 chapter 4 . 3/15/2022
IT IS VERY [Specil]
Blackheart7272 chapter 3 . 3/15/2022
THIS IS THE [$!?] THING I'VE EVER [[Reading Glasses Now Only $1997]]
Blackheart7272 chapter 2 . 3/15/2022
[[This Is The Quality I've Come To Expect! (C)1997]]
Blackheart7272 chapter 1 . 3/15/2022
IT'S SO GOOD, I'M [$!X$]ING MYSELF!
catrey10000 chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
This is good for your first story! The names are unique, but I like that!
You could definitely improve on grammar a little, though 3
Hey, could I help write one of the Chapters? It'd be an honor!
Skyflier13 chapter 2 . 11/10/2013
OMG have you even READ the Warriors series? You DO realize their names are SO not what you are writing. Try for something more realistic like Dovecloud, or Fernwing. NOT what ever you just wrote!
lavi0123 chapter 8 . 11/10/2013
Umm...ok, but can you make the names a bit more realistic?
Jaysong chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
please improve your grammar! i know you can spell because i read your poetry.