Reviews for Candykit's New Moon |
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![]() ![]() ![]() HOLY [[Cungadero]] THIS IS GREAT |
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![]() ![]() ![]() IT'S SO GOOD, I'M [$!X$]ING MYSELF! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is good for your first story! The names are unique, but I like that! You could definitely improve on grammar a little, though 3 Hey, could I help write one of the Chapters? It'd be an honor! |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMG have you even READ the Warriors series? You DO realize their names are SO not what you are writing. Try for something more realistic like Dovecloud, or Fernwing. NOT what ever you just wrote! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Umm...ok, but can you make the names a bit more realistic? |
![]() ![]() please improve your grammar! i know you can spell because i read your poetry. |