|Reviews for The Silver Child|
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/24/2017
| what hurts chapter 8 . 12/4/2017
omg l.a.m.a.o seriously not fair lol zoecy I guess
| what hurts chapter 7 . 12/4/2017
Zoey and percy yyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssss!
| Winter-Buzz chapter 4 . 8/28/2017
You really need to work on your dialogue and monologue. Percy has a much too advanced vocabulary for a four year old, which clashes disgustingly with his lisp. He is also way to intelligent, were you so aware as a four year old?
| Darrenn100 chapter 18 . 5/19/2017
MORE CHAPTERS I'M SHAKING IN EXCITEMENT
| Puppy 17 chapter 18 . 4/13/2017
This is EPIC! Please continue This awesome story:)
| Guest chapter 9 . 3/31/2017
Holy shit your percy is beyond stupid. He lives with a goddess making an exception for him, he lies a bunch to her about prometheus, and when they want to know the truth about his birthday trip he doesnt just tell them "i swear on the styx it wasnt me" like shit. In the original series it makes sense because percy is brand new to all of this. But this percy has been with the hunt for years. Then after 2 sentences from Luke, Percy starts thinking the gods have done nothing for him? What the shit. At least make it believable. He even found the true thief. Turn that shit in. Percy should have a predisposed view of males because of hermes and apollos actions, and the hunters. On top of that Luke flat out mentions Kronos. Percy in this story has no reason at all to betray his adoptive mom.
| Soundshockwave chapter 8 . 1/12/2017
I guess you could say Percy was howling with laughter
I'm a horrible person
| WeAreIdealist chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
What you did there is very good even though Artemis is a man-hating goddess she is also the goddess of childbirth and children fall in to that domain and Percy is a child even if he is a male
| PERCY JACKSON chapter 15 . 11/24/2016
No! I freaking die in EVERY SINGLE F*UKING FANFICTION! WHY?! NOOOOOOO!
| SkyFantasia221 chapter 18 . 11/13/2016
Whens the next chapter!
| Apollo is boss chapter 18 . 11/12/2016
please keep keep writing this is a good story. just check the grammar more.
| SpencerDorman chapter 18 . 9/9/2016
Zoë should not have brought up Lupa, a ROMAN goddess, in front of GREEKS. For one, I doubt Thalia would know who she is, so she would question it, but even if she did or not, she would have found out eventually that she was a Roman goddess, and that she is obviously real and still around today, and that would not be good. And, seeing as how Thalia didn't flip out over it, I can only assume that she didn't know who or what Lupa is, and thus she wouldn't have known that Percy needed a different explanation for Clarisse than the one she was given.
Other than that, I like the chapter, and the story as a whole, so please update soon!
| SpencerDorman chapter 16 . 9/9/2016
I like the story so far, but you have to realize that the gods should have seen that the story does not add up. The guy who told them that Percy's FATHER (he clearly stated father, not mother or simply parent) was an enemy to Olympus swore on the Styx, meaning he is obviously telling the truth. Obviously, that would mean that his father is involved in the immortal world, so they should be able to realize that his father is not mortal (unlike what Artemis being the mother of a demigod would require). That would obviously raise questions as to how Percy is a demigod (they don't know that he is technically a demititan) if neither of his parents are mortal (as one parent would need to be mortal). That would immediately put down the idea that Artemis is his birth mother as his father would have to be the one who is immortal (the informant swore on the Styx...), so their shouldn't have been so much fuss about Artemis' supposedly broken vow. They would obviously now wonder who his father is, and he could just say that he doesn't know (for both this situation and the one where he just outright tells them that Artemis adopted him). And even if none of the other gods didn't figure it out, Athena should have been able to, being the wisdom goddess and all.
| Alexandra chapter 18 . 6/16/2016
IT HAS BEEN TWO YEARS! PLEASE START WRITING AGAIN!