Reviews for Crooked Lines
XxVallirenxX chapter 1 . 8/8/2017
If we're going to look at this in a more deep way... Damn. Just. Damn. This is freaking amazing, and I don't know HOW I didn't find your writing sooner. Sheer words cannot express the amount of emotions you throw at me, with angst and heartbreak and passion and comfort and lust and fluff (which you do not suck at writing!), your works are an emotional rollercoaster. This is beautiful, your stories are beautiful, everything is beautiful!

How to describe this in words... Unbelievable. Heavenly. Stunning. Sensual.

Never stop writing such beautiful things. They are treasured pieces of art that I will enjoy forever. They are worth more than you could ever realize.

-XxVallirenxX (because I have nothing else that I can coherently type right now)
Thank you chapter 1 . 7/24/2016
Oh my god (Chandler Bing style, idk why). I've read several of this authors stories now and they can all be described in one word. Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. Every one I have read so far has brought joy to my heart and tears to my eyes and a warm fuzzy feeling all over. Amazing writing! Thank you :)
mitsuyo-chan chapter 1 . 9/27/2015
Haha, don't worry, that's not that bad :D I liked it, actually :)
orangemangopudding chapter 1 . 8/3/2015
Dammit. Dammit, damit, dammit. I'm flipping crying. Gimmie a sec.

This is just so, so beautifully written. Everything is so subtle, really delicately strung out words is just beautiful and i can just imagine the colours blooming like watercolour dripping on papaer or canvas or whatever painters/artists use its so calming to read this is beautiful
sayaanara chapter 1 . 11/27/2014
I'm obsessed with reading your stories. Seriously. It's blissfully toxic.
Guest chapter 1 . 4/16/2014
AMGA THIS- *dies from pure amazingness overload*
((You did kinda fail at writing fluff tho...))
LettersToHeartbreak chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
I'm generally a silent reader; but this more then deserves a review because... Just omg the perfectness...
You describe the world through Levi's eyes perfectly, and I can almost see the grey world like I'm standing in it.
When you mention Eren's colors, it stands out and is so hard to miss, it's new and fansinsting, but scary to approach because it's different. As you describe Levi's world slowly becoming colorful, I swear I see the colors bleed themselves in, staining the world in a loud, colorful spectrum.
You describe the moods in a way where the reader can feel them, and frankly; I'm a bit jealous :) this is a story that is DIFFIDENTLY going on be on my retread list.
Rirenne chapter 1 . 1/3/2014
This..this hit so close to home...
uGH YOU do not suck at fluff I just spilled my coff-HEART on my keyboard because your writing it literally emotion. It's raw and it steals me away and twists things inside me. It breaks the laws of time and aaaaaaand I'm rambling but I love this soooo much...Your stories feel like art to me...they are
Llamadrama22 chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
OMG can u please stop? YOUR STORIES ARE AMAZING! Please keep writing! Don't say you suck because you are so talented and I can't wait till you write something else! :D
MissAmRi chapter 1 . 12/6/2013
You are amazing at writing fluff. That was beautiful. Levi seemed a bit OOC but it was okay, it was simple, and beautiful and I just loved it! Keep up the amazing writing!
lilithemaid chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
No you DON'T suck at writing fluff woman!
This was beautiful!
ZeldaTifa chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
Wow! I loved it!
9haharharley1 chapter 1 . 10/17/2013
I thought this was very beautiful and I think you write fluff very well. Of course, Levi seems a little too emotional, but for this particular AU, it works. I do hope you write more Riren, I really enjoyed this piece and would love to see more!
poakkis chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
I really liked the setting that it's Eren who's purposefully guiding Levi and Levi is acting like a normal human. Let's face it, if he had grown up in an alternate universe like yours, he wouldn't be acting like he does in the manga, so the ooc-ness doesn't bother me. Good job .
Draco de Laviathan chapter 1 . 10/15/2013
This is beautiful. You didn't suck. And I love how you write.

I'll look forward to your other stories!