Reviews for Naruto The Yellow Death and Kushina Red Death :The Legend Of Two Death
TylerJay333 chapter 5 . 4/5
more chapters PLEASE 3 love this stuff. how soon till naruto meets his mother?
Marquette117 chapter 3 . 3/4
Multiple tense shifts and again with the colons.
Marquette117 chapter 1 . 3/4
Bro chill with all the colons. They're used to introduce a list or an idea not join two sentences. You're thinking a semi-colon.
arinasution5 chapter 5 . 11/28/2016
salasdaniel74 chapter 4 . 11/7/2016
I will merely guess and not read the next chapter. She is an uzumaki at a dangerous level that orochimaru choose for his next possession, but failed as he didn't account for the will of the mother to take over. OR she might have been orochimaru all along and she faked her death in a chance to have her immortal shota life (don't ask how I thought that.)
Gold Testament chapter 3 . 9/24/2016
Kushina's attitude in this is actually what people tend to expect of Hinata.
AnimeKing211 chapter 4 . 4/30/2016
Whoa, talk about a yandere mother. I like this yandere Kushina.
my 2 guys chapter 2 . 4/2/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
my 2 guys chapter 1 . 4/1/2016
that was good keep the chapters coming
The Adventurer of All chapter 1 . 12/30/2015
Cosmic Being, back the fuck off! It may suck but that does not mean you nead to be a jackass about it! Author keep getting better. Good plot too, just needs a little work.
Guest chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
childish trash bye.
agitofang666 chapter 5 . 8/8/2015
dude all of your chapters are now focusing on longass flashbacks seriously 3/5 is a flashback and 1/5 is the Author Notes, and the last 1/5 is the actual present serously wtf
DesertxFox chapter 5 . 8/7/2015
Awww plz update I really enjoyed this
mr.sunshine chapter 5 . 8/4/2015
You did a great job so far can't wait for your next update I will be waiting. :-) ;-)
redwolf23456 chapter 5 . 7/10/2015
Great story so far
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