|Reviews for Hermione Granger: The Witching Hour|
| guy3467 chapter 4 . 3/8
Enjoying your story & i'm looking forward to the next chapter . Keep up the good work!
| doubledamn chapter 1 . 3/7
Interesting, I haven't seen this with anyone but Harry before, well written so far, and an interesting twist. I look forward to more.
| IrisAmber chapter 4 . 2/13
I love this. I love this. I love this. Please keep writing this one, it's so nice to have a videogame version with Hermione as the main. It puts a new refreshing spin on it.
| bogus1 chapter 3 . 2/7
The dialogue and thoughts are very stilted, even the narrative is so. I gave up on this story when you made a point of saying Hermione delivered a "graceful" apology. That word is there why? A substantial fraction of the population has no idea what the fuck it means. It comes right out of the 17th century upper classes. I happen to know what graceful means, and I can tell you it violates my personality and it violates Hermione Granger's personality too. She is graceless. Your claiming she's graceful is the equivalent of, and exactly as believable as, having her shoot lighting bolts out of her arse. You are raping the character with your emotionally detached upper-crust 17th century speech! You are a terrible writer.
| Shannyrox101 chapter 4 . 2/1
I have never read a story like this and I just love the idea. Your doing a great job so far! I wish I could play this game XD
| vagae056yahoo.c chapter 2 . 1/22
i just got to the point of the formula figuring out the total level of perception. but since she has to have at least one level in each skill, doesn't that mean the primary (only) skill will never get doubled? alternatively, (if i'm overlooking something while drunk) if a single skill doubles it (a 10 endurance goes to 20 alteration) wouldn't it be more advantages to NOT increase perception? since the new formulat would end up with a 5 (since it rounds down)? (i'm not including the base value since that cancles out with itself on both sides of teh equations.) Meh, imma gonna finish the chapter now.
If i overlooked something obvious, (to an engineering major, which i am) then blame it on the US ARMY for getting me to drink so much. And then read. cause it's 2044, and most of my battlebuddies are sleeping for training tomorrow, so i shouldn't bother them since i'm a social drunk...
Love and affection? 3
| alex.rushing.5 chapter 4 . 1/23
Poor hermoine. No turtorial to grind. Or the patience for it.
| Caellach Tiger Eye chapter 1 . 1/22
... Really? You're actually going the "Pureblood-Hermione" route, making her parents not her parents and all that?
On top of that, there's the use of snarky God-like beings who manage the game... really?
I can't... I'm sorry, this is cliché to the nth degree. I refuse to touch this any longer.
... Good luck.
| Will love ever come chapter 4 . 1/21
Just wanted to tell you Great story and I have a few ideas for some quests:
I think Hermione should go back to Diagon Ally to get a chest and bump into Harry and have to help him.
Also making a friend before Hogwarts would be cool
reading/understanding/mastering all the books before getting to Hogwarts
A quest involving Luna or the twins
Sirius Black out of prison early
as for perks maybe
Magical Animagus but I think you are already doing one for that
Romance is in the air
10 to Charisma
Understanding Magical A Being
6 to Knowledge
Also with this one if she chooses house elf she could gain one or something like that
Knowledge is power
20% off Flourish and blots - for life
cant wait til you update
| alburrthdo chapter 4 . 1/21
Soy de españa, iba a ponerte el comentario en inglés, pero quiero que veas que soy de muy lejos y he leído tu historia, creo que es fantástica, felicidades!
Te deseo suerte con el próximo, tengo ganas de que salgan ya Fred y George (Adoro a esos gemelos) Por cierto, ¿El fic será de harry y Hermione o vas a hacer otras parejas?
| pseudotothenym chapter 4 . 1/21
Ee, she found Crookshanks early. This is such a fun and interesting fic. I'm looking forward to the adoption mystery being further revealed. It's funny, but many of Hermione's choices are my own in Fallout - always go for the extra skill points as early as possible.
| Nala Moon chapter 4 . 1/21
Amazing story so far :) can't wait for more! It's just so unique in the idea and way it's written I love it! Can't wait for more!
| dhampirkinfolk chapter 4 . 1/21
If Hermione isn't smart enough to use her other rank in Potential Polyglot to pick up Parseltongue before she starts second year, I'm going to be very disappointed. Not only would it allow her to cut Ginny off at the pass and kill the basilisk with a rooster before anyone gets petrified, it will give her a way to communicate with Harry in secret. That has not only tactical advantages, but will bring her closer to him on an emotional level.
| Serfius chapter 4 . 1/21
7 perk points at the next level up? Jeez, there aren't even that many perks revealed that I'd want to pick. I hope she can save them for later. Also, good idea with having some perks costing multiple points, I don't think I've seen that before.
| Alessandra.12 chapter 4 . 1/21
Hi! I loved your story, i really really liked it because is special, theres only one, and is interesting too.
Please, upload soon.