|Reviews for Jane, Queen of the Jungle|
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 5 . 10/12/2016
Poor Jane, though I expected a cold shower in that damp heat to be very refreshing. I always lower the water temperature in the heat to feel resheshed or else I feel like I'm chocking. It does miracles, for a short while. A world without wifi is no world at all for those who've grown up with it. No Twitter, tumblr, FB, google... music... movies...
It reminds me of ye 90s when it took 2 hours to connect to the internet and we'd be throwing a party even when we had the slightest bit of connection. Good times. XD
Interesting twist. So they're going to look for Tarzan now? Though I doubt they'd have to search much. He'd probably appear in front of Jane sooner or later. XD After he has observed her long enough from afar. XD
I really hope you'all continue with this story, because it's really interesting.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 4 . 10/12/2016
I noticed I little errors here, instead of drew a picture, shouldn't it be, took a picture? Because she used her phone, right? Bye expensive booth and phone... forced away boy the wildlife. Never to be used properly again. XD her phone would run out of batteries soon anyway and then bye bye baboon photo. I wonder if the baby will cry again and they look for Jane again to fix the phone problem. XD
I find Archimedes so funny. Jane's family all seem to have some mental issues. If her mother comes up with crazy stories, or is she a fanfic writer? And there's also that aunt of them who walks weird.
I'm sure they both think she went nuts, but how do they explain the trashed camp and Jane's missing items and the poor state she's in? She got lost in the jungle and inhaled the scent of some poisonous plant?
Anyway thanks for the great chapter!
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 3 . 10/12/2016
Well, there goes a 700 pound phone. I'm sure her father can get her a new one without problem, but it's still a waste of money, especially since it's in the possession of a monkey, who probably breaks it in seconds. There goes her music, her contact information the millions of pictures she took... well at least she is still alive, has no problem of heights... I would have clung myself against a tree. XD my legs would have probably given up and I might faint from fright. My acrophobia is that bad to the point where I can't get into a small Ferris wheel without hyperventilating.
Poor Jane, it's just not her day...
I really loved the chapter and you're right, their meeting was one of the most wonderful scenes of the movies.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 2 . 10/12/2016
You've incorporated the elements from the present great into the story! Also the small cameo that was originally from the books about Tarzan being the white ape spirit. XD I laughed at that part.
Damn poor Jane, her smart phone got stolen by a baboon... he has no idea how much money that costs, let's not forget that there's a change that it can break he phone and then she'd be completely hopeless. I can't imagine my life without my iPad, phone or laptop.
I guess tip of the day: don't show your phone to an animal.
I really loved this chapter. Poor Jane, having to run in the humid... just great.
| xxxDreamingflowerxxx chapter 1 . 10/12/2016
Owww interessant modern AU! Poor Jane, no internet, no phone, ... do they have airco with them? Because I doubt Jane would be able to sleep well in the humid heat. If I can't sleep properly during the summer in my own country the. Africa would be a million times worse, and let's not forget about those damn mosquitoes. I'd really love to read about the part where Jane tries to get through the day while looking for Gorillas with her father and Clayton while Tarzan is stalking them in secret. XD
| Hathor-Aroha chapter 5 . 9/17/2016
I must say, I have enjoyed every one of these chapters so far, including this one! You have obviously done a lot of research into this and that's probably my favourite thing about this fic (as well as the impeccable grammar and the pace of the plot-it goes quick enough that I never get bored, but not so quick that I'm left in the dust). It has been a wild ride (sans angry baboons, thankfully) all the way and while I see it hasn't been updated since 2014, I hope that one day you might come back to it and continue this wonderfully written AU.
| Hathor-Aroha chapter 2 . 9/17/2016
Another delightful chapter, marrying the narrative of the original movie into the modern day setting in a way that takes nothing away from the story! I can tell you have done some research as well into where the Porters would be staying and who would be guiding them into the jungle at the base of the mountain. Especially enjoyed the switching of the drawing of the baby baboon for a photograph of said animal-a perfect upgrade for the modern setting!
| Hathor-Aroha chapter 1 . 9/17/2016
A brilliant and well-written beginning to the story, with everyone keeping to character like in the movie, but with the modern twists added. The details in this are great, setting out the scenery and hot African environment from the beginning, with some quick backstory interwoven into the narrative, but always keeping the story on track. This definitely had me hooked from the start, as I actually had a similar idea as well, but a little earlier in time than the 21st century, and you certainly delivered on this AU so far!
| D chapter 5 . 7/31/2015
is there more!? this is getting super addictive! tell me theres more on the way!
| Cena Beana chapter 1 . 7/7/2015
Why is fic not popular yet! I love the humor and idea of putting a modern twist on the story, please please please update soon!
| Guest chapter 5 . 4/13/2015
| SilverWildRiver chapter 5 . 4/7/2015
this story was going great, let me know if you plan to write again
| tuttycute chapter 2 . 1/6/2015
Unfortunately, this is JUST like the movie, except her journal was swapped with a cell phone and other such modern swaps. Try and change things up with an original scene or two per chapter so it's not just like the film.
Like logging in :/ sorry.
| D chapter 5 . 12/11/2014
Brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant brilliant! Please please update soon I love this story! Awesome idea you have going on! :D
| SuperPsychoLove chapter 5 . 11/28/2014
OMG PLEEEEEEAAAAAAAASE UPDATE! :))))