Reviews for Cruel and Unusual Punishment
OliviaaaMay chapter 5 . 3/23/2014
OMG I love this so much, especially the last chapter(; I love the writing style and the descriptions are amazing! Plus, your ideas are hot and enthralling3 love how the story's played out so far an where it's heading. Please update soon though, I literally NEED to know what happens next:O keep writing!xD xxxx
Sam chapter 5 . 3/3/2014
How is it that this story is so incredibly good with only 5 chapters? Wow, I am loving this Damon so much, reminds me of the one in the TVD books and damn, tha moment with Elena was hot, these two idiots are gonna end up falling for Elena, I can't wait for Katherine to get to MF, things should get interesting, I noticed tha you haven't updated this since october, hope everything is ok with you and you can get back to this story soon.
ASalvatoreSoul chapter 5 . 11/8/2013
Amazing chapter! Well this fic should have more reviews, it's pretty damn awesome, that DE scene was so erotic and amazing, also it kinda makes me giggle that in any universe or fic Stefan is a blood junkie, only in yours the need for revenge seems to make him even more unstable...I can't wait to see where you're going with this, please update soon
lina89 chapter 5 . 10/29/2013
this story is so trilling and exciting to read loved it! awesome chapter! love the effect he has on her and how u describe it! can't wait for more
noorasaetres chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Another amazing chapter, I can't wait to see what happens next! :)
English Pointer chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Wow, I'm just loving this story. What a rich and detailed chapter. I'm a little confused as to whether Elena's dreams/preoccupation with Damon are 100% coming from her, or whether he's influencing her thoughts. But maybe that's the point. I love that Damon admitted to himself that he's addicted to power, and that's coming across beautifully. I wish Elena on this show were this interesting.
RockingLife2 chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
Holy cow! This chapter was absolutely fantastic...You are a hell of a writer. Please update quickly. This is getting soooo good! Ahhhhh
Moniposa chapter 4 . 10/27/2013
Wow, I love this story a lot! It's very dynamic and everything flows at a reasonable pace. One thing I thought I'd comment on is that it's completely okay to use contractions- the dialogue seems very forced and robotically polite without contractions. Other than that, keep up the good work!
lloveless9 chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
LOVED this chapter! PERFECT! can't wait for more! i LOVE Damon-saving-Elena-from-crazy-Stefan type ish, its my fav, so hope to see more of that?! (grins sheepishly) lol. Thanks! xoxo
venus.delena chapter 5 . 10/27/2013
I definetly loved this chapter,damn Stefan for ruining the moment between good that U write a lot in each chapter..can't waite for the fun ;-)
megs06 chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
I really like your direction and character development. It is great that you are exploring different POV's.
Great job. This seems to be really well thought out. The only suggestion I would make, if any, is to watch the run-on sentences. I look forward to continuing to read your story. :)
TVD.FictionWriter chapter 4 . 10/24/2013
I think this story is very interesting. I haven't read anything quite like it, and that's rare for me. I am such a HUGE Damon and Elena fan, but that also makes me very picky on stories that I read about them. I love the last paragraph especially in this chapter because it shows just how much Elena trusts Damon already. I think this was true in the show. She might have spoke bad about him, might have been unsure around him, but she always thought the best of him and made him think about things that actually mattered. (For example, at the Halloween party in season one when she yelled at him about caring and things mattering). I think that time and this chapter shows just how much Elena can put her faith into him. It's their bond and strength that makes them such a great couple; even when they're not actually 'together' yet.
English Pointer chapter 1 . 10/24/2013
Wow, this is wonderful so far. I'm so glad I found it. I feel like I'm reading Vampire Diaries as I wish it was written (for adults, not teenagers). Thank you so much for such detailed work. I'm hooked!
CB25 chapter 3 . 10/22/2013
AMAZING! Cannot wait for the next chapter!
RockingLife2 chapter 4 . 10/23/2013
Let me tell you something woman, this is getting ridiculously intense and soooo good! Oh, I imagine what you have in site for us...yay...Please, have mercy and update soon...pretty please with a hot Damon on top! ;)
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